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Array ( [sid] => 142509 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This Sky [time] => 2008-05-20 07:27:50 [hometext] => An experiment. I'm sure you can say what I'm taking about.. [bodytext] => The sky sheds tears of joy
For which the earth gives her self.
The flock of birds call a conference,
To display their beauty by the river side.

You flew somewhere dancing and singing a lullaby from the heart.
You asked me to live with your memory on those days you were gone.
Come down on this earth for me when I call you.
Consider this a boon and give it to me like a God.

Blend with the mountains and rivers,
You give that cool, fragrant breeze.

Lightning with thunder, will there be no rain soon?
Won’t the gang of clouds wander, searching for the stars?
The sun marched with his army one day.
The next day the flowers filled the air with sweet perfume.

When the rain comes falling down,
Our burden is taken away?
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This Sky

Contributed by Vic on Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 07:27:50 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

The sky sheds tears of joy
For which the earth gives her self.
The flock of birds call a conference,
To display their beauty by the river side.

You flew somewhere dancing and singing a lullaby from the heart.
You asked me to live with your memory on those days you were gone.
Come down on this earth for me when I call you.
Consider this a boon and give it to me like a God.

Blend with the mountains and rivers,
You give that cool, fragrant breeze.

Lightning with thunder, will there be no rain soon?
Won’t the gang of clouds wander, searching for the stars?
The sun marched with his army one day.
The next day the flowers filled the air with sweet perfume.

When the rain comes falling down,
Our burden is taken away?

Copyright Â© Vic ... [ 2008-05-20 07:27:50]
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Re: This Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by Muinanyere on Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 07:52:05 AM AEST
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I really liked this especially the way you discribed the sun and clouds. Nice write.

Re: This Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 07:54:55 AM AEST
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Brilliant use of metaphors... I loved this..
Jenni

Re: This Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by vampyrekiss on Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 08:35:16 AM AEST
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brilliant

Re: This Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 11:44:24 AM AEST
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oh this is beautiful. it has a great flow the entire way through. i especially love the fourth stanza. great write!! :]

Re: This Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 02:48:24 AM AEST
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Nicely written

Re: This Sky (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 05:11:52 PM AEST
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Awesome, need I say more?
smiles,
emy

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