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Array ( [sid] => 142517 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mr. D. [time] => 2008-05-20 16:15:42 [hometext] => Let Me Know Your Honest Opinion and Please Rate, Thanks!! [bodytext] => Everything seemed like it would be great, and everything seemed like it would fall into place
But when i blinked my eyes and a little time went by i asked myself 'what happened?' because this can't be right
...i try and look into the future and get no result, i try to mend the holes in this plan but i guess it all fell apart...
i got reassurance but it wasn't enough, because in the end there was no result....doesn't mean im not grateful for what it played in the part, but not even the holy spirit could've changed that heart...it seemed like it was all there ready to go, but obviously it was way too shallow...i could still give it time, maybe it will be, but if i give it time maybe i'll be setting myself up for melancholy...try to be optimistic, but my realistic views are clouding the way...only if their was a light, only if their was a glimpse, maybe i'd get what id like or maybe i'd get *****...lets just wait it out, lets just see, but honestly speaking i see nothing to see... [comments] => 0 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 75 [informant] => mama4lyf [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )
Mr. D.

Contributed by mama4lyf on Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 04:15:42 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished



Everything seemed like it would be great, and everything seemed like it would fall into place
But when i blinked my eyes and a little time went by i asked myself 'what happened?' because this can't be right
...i try and look into the future and get no result, i try to mend the holes in this plan but i guess it all fell apart...
i got reassurance but it wasn't enough, because in the end there was no result....doesn't mean im not grateful for what it played in the part, but not even the holy spirit could've changed that heart...it seemed like it was all there ready to go, but obviously it was way too shallow...i could still give it time, maybe it will be, but if i give it time maybe i'll be setting myself up for melancholy...try to be optimistic, but my realistic views are clouding the way...only if their was a light, only if their was a glimpse, maybe i'd get what id like or maybe i'd get *****...lets just wait it out, lets just see, but honestly speaking i see nothing to see...




Copyright © mama4lyf ... [ 2008-05-20 16:15:42]
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