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Irrational Confusion
Contributed by
SilverRain
on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 06:06:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Intoxicated with a six pack on ice
running wild like a trap animal
trying to get out with nowhere to go
nowhere to run too
nowhere to hide
Wild eyes dashing around frantically
no trust in the hand that feeds it no more
His fault that I am where I am anyway
Running around in circles
trying to find my mind
Instead only finding the blackness
you left behind
and as it starts to cover me,
envelop my mind
I cry out just one more time
Copyright ©
SilverRain
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2008-05-21 18:06:09]
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Re: Irrational Confusion
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by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 09:39:47 PM AEST
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Very powerful piece of writing. Great job.
Deadwriter
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Re: Irrational Confusion
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by Muinanyere on
Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 08:00:27 AM AEST
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| I feel exactly the same way right now, you described it so well. Good write. |
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Re: Irrational Confusion
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by shelby on
Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 08:53:52 AM AEST
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I felt you in this one hun, something I also relate to.
Keep writing it is good for you soul.
Powerful and heart filled write.
Huge hugs and feel happy soon.
Michelle |
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Re: Irrational Confusion
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by Arijadna77 on
Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 04:11:56 PM AEST
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"no trust in the hand that feeds it no more"
this kind of poetry suits me:)
Bravo |
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Re: Irrational Confusion
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by InfinitePoet on
Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 01:40:19 AM AEST
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great Write!! Trust and trying to find peace of mind are 2 very diffuvult things and you touched on them both with your words!! Keep up the good work! Keep posting and keep being a poet!
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