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Array ( [sid] => 14265 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => to the one who borne me [time] => 2003-03-14 02:40:00 [hometext] => eh its scattered ,non form ,no reason its my mind yer welcome to it [bodytext] => when i called you mommy
playing wide eyed child
so easily you left stole away during the night
was it cuz you couldnt stand to see my plight
growing up tormented ostrasized shunned
a summer to you.. a christmas an easter
im sorry i didnt mean to pester..

when i call you mom .. you never called back... always on step away form disaster moving not looking back
wishing for a call a card
a remebered present
did you think i was strange 13 sleeping at the foot of your bed on the floor
its how i felt... you never saw.. never could see

a man .. you let me back in , held me down but never close.
tried to rule me by deciet,
instead of pointing the right path with your heart
drivin out by a horrific lie
a tale of a baby stolen innocence
bought to life by you
shunned again not by little peers
but now by blood

you asked me to fogive.. yet did any of them
i tried to live and let live but i hear them not laughing and whispering at me not with me
you asked me to forget
maybe i havent
you asked me to call you mommy again
i dont think i will
just dont ask me to chosse your nursing home.... mother...
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to the one who borne me

Contributed by zeroelysium on Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 02:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



when i called you mommy
playing wide eyed child
so easily you left stole away during the night
was it cuz you couldnt stand to see my plight
growing up tormented ostrasized shunned
a summer to you.. a christmas an easter
im sorry i didnt mean to pester..

when i call you mom .. you never called back... always on step away form disaster moving not looking back
wishing for a call a card
a remebered present
did you think i was strange 13 sleeping at the foot of your bed on the floor
its how i felt... you never saw.. never could see

a man .. you let me back in , held me down but never close.
tried to rule me by deciet,
instead of pointing the right path with your heart
drivin out by a horrific lie
a tale of a baby stolen innocence
bought to life by you
shunned again not by little peers
but now by blood

you asked me to fogive.. yet did any of them
i tried to live and let live but i hear them not laughing and whispering at me not with me
you asked me to forget
maybe i havent
you asked me to call you mommy again
i dont think i will
just dont ask me to chosse your nursing home.... mother...




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Re: to the one who borne me (User Rating: 1 )
by riverofwords on Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 09:12:19 AM AEST
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well this speaks from the heartt if yuo went through this ..it must have been awful
but you expressed so well

great write

peace be your journey

terry


Re: to the one who borne me (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 09:54:32 AM AEST
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wow, that's a lot for someone to endure. i can feel your conviction here. keep writing. and best of luck to you.


Re: to the one who borne me (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 10:02:27 AM AEST
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good heart kid...glad to be your adopted mom by choice...sorry i didn't get to know you sooner in life
Mom


Re: to the one who borne me (User Rating: 1 )
by zeroelysium on Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 12:24:58 PM AEST
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heh mom aj and i already determined we saved you a lot of police line up and late night "yer boys been arresed phone call" by not knoing each other earlier:)


Re: to the one who borne me (User Rating: 1 )
by etherealgurl on Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 09:43:33 PM AEST
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honest and gut wrenching...this some of the best I've seen of your writing. It takes great courage to face your demons and ask them to leave like you did. Bravo! ~cheryl




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