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Array ( [sid] => 142661 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Smoke Keeps Rising… [time] => 2008-05-25 11:43:04 [hometext] => ever hated ur life more than anything else? [bodytext] =>

The smoke keeps rising
As my heart burns
The smoke keeps rising
As my emotions erupt
The smoke keeps rising
As my feelings melt
The smoke keeps rising
As my inner-self evaporates
The smoke keeps rising
As my senses disappear
The smoke keeps rising
As my heart breaks
The smoke keeps rising
As my soul escapes
The smoke keeps rising
As I let go
The smoke keeps rising
As I try to forget
The smoke keeps rising
As I put out my cigarette… [comments] => 3 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 61 [informant] => alibof10 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

The Smoke Keeps Rising…

Contributed by alibof10 on Sunday, 25th May 2008 @ 11:43:04 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

The smoke keeps rising
As my heart burns
The smoke keeps rising
As my emotions erupt
The smoke keeps rising
As my feelings melt
The smoke keeps rising
As my inner-self evaporates
The smoke keeps rising
As my senses disappear
The smoke keeps rising
As my heart breaks
The smoke keeps rising
As my soul escapes
The smoke keeps rising
As I let go
The smoke keeps rising
As I try to forget
The smoke keeps rising
As I put out my cigarette…

Copyright Â© alibof10 ... [ 2008-05-25 11:43:04]
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Re: The Smoke Keeps Rising… (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 25th May 2008 @ 02:27:18 PM AEST
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I loved this and the very end made me smile. Poof we are all up in smoke.

Great job with this

Michelle

Re: The Smoke Keeps Rising… (User Rating: 1 )
by ratty on Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 12:43:02 PM AEST
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Yeah, the last line was good for a nice smile.....Liked it....

Re: The Smoke Keeps Rising… (User Rating: 1 )
by BRIDGI on Sunday, 15th June 2008 @ 12:03:29 AM AEST
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wow i love it...it leads us on to think maybe your trying to commit suicide...but yeah your showing...that smoking is like your get away like it helps your forget...

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