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Array ( [sid] => 142735 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Two months of freedom summer paridise [time] => 2008-05-28 10:58:28 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It sounds repeditive to me but I just thought this up on the spot. but it's not my best write but maybe you'll like it.

Two months
may make you think you have all the time in the world
Even if it's just for a breaks
thats all it takes

It's summer and i'm on break
No more school
Now I get to swim in my pool
but that doesn't matter
Life all follows a patteren

But for now I have all the time in the world
And thats all i care
I have time now to do things worldwide here and there
Two months is all it takes
to make you think
you have all the time in the world
Until you have to start that patteren again

I've got two months of summer
two months to be free
two months to lay back and just be me
That's the best
I don't care what the rest think
that's my summer paridise
just to be free
and be me [comments] => 1 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Voice of the Silent [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Two months of freedom summer paridise

Contributed by Voice of the Silent on Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 10:58:28 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

It sounds repeditive to me but I just thought this up on the spot. but it's not my best write but maybe you'll like it.

Two months
may make you think you have all the time in the world
Even if it's just for a breaks
thats all it takes

It's summer and i'm on break
No more school
Now I get to swim in my pool
but that doesn't matter
Life all follows a patteren

But for now I have all the time in the world
And thats all i care
I have time now to do things worldwide here and there
Two months is all it takes
to make you think
you have all the time in the world
Until you have to start that patteren again

I've got two months of summer
two months to be free
two months to lay back and just be me
That's the best
I don't care what the rest think
that's my summer paridise
just to be free
and be me

Copyright © Voice of the Silent ... [ 2008-05-28 10:58:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Two months of freedom summer paridise (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 11:13:08 AM AEST
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Very good work, friend.
Awesome, jus cut loose and be you.
Have a heavenly Summer.
huggs, smiles, summer,
emy

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