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Contributed by
alibof10
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Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 10:09:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sitting alone in my room
My body at home but my minds taking a roam
Visiting the place I met
The awesome girl I want to get
Remembering the gaze of her eyes
Which filled my stomach with butterflies
And the smile on her face
Filling my soul with grace
Mesmerized by the perfect lips
An image that forces an eclipse
Bewildered by the amazing smell
I dont want to escape her spell
No matter what I did to repel
Or the times I went along and fell
This time I can simply tell
I have been saved from hell
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2008-05-29 22:09:31]
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Re: Saved
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by safetyinnumbers on
Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 10:48:30 PM AEST
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Nicely write.....what a feeling...and you captured it so well....a beautiful feeling it is too!! |
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