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Array ( [sid] => 142814 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Take care of yourself [time] => 2008-05-30 14:43:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Take care of yourself

That night,

I couldn't sleep well.

"Take care of yourself!"

I remembered I forgot to said that words.

As I had been lying wide awake for a couple of hours,

I knew I would come in for it once more.

specially,

I remembered that evening,

you came and asked me,

" Would you like to have a walk with me outside?

I have something to tell you."

I could see you had some disturbing experience from your face.

We walked slowly,

I asked you,

" Clue me in on what happened."

"Oh, wait a minute."

you didn't immediately speak your mind,

you stopped and sat on the catwalk of the bridge,

"Sit yourself down,

I will tell you what happened."

You told me something special about one friend of yours.

His heart stopped beating in a accident,

"He is the only son in his family,

his mother was almost mad with grief when she knew his son died."

You were on the verge of tears,

I wiped your tears away with my hands.

I huged you tightly on my chest,

"I understand your mood."

you held my hands softly,

"Thank you for understanding."

You snuggled up to me and listening my song,

"I like having you around,

to see the turtle swimming in the sea,

to lying on the beach,

and saturate in sunshine.

to see the breaking waves left the beach covered with foam.

Let us be lazy just lying around on the beach all day,

let our ship ground on a sandbank.

you will never feel lonely,

I also never feel unhappy,

until you are a very old man,

I become a gray woman.

I like having you around,

you like having me around.

......"

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Take care of yourself

Contributed by holy on Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 02:43:41 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Take care of yourself

That night,

I couldn't sleep well.

"Take care of yourself!"

I remembered I forgot to said that words.

As I had been lying wide awake for a couple of hours,

I knew I would come in for it once more.

specially,

I remembered that evening,

you came and asked me,

" Would you like to have a walk with me outside?

I have something to tell you."

I could see you had some disturbing experience from your face.

We walked slowly,

I asked you,

" Clue me in on what happened."

"Oh, wait a minute."

you didn't immediately speak your mind,

you stopped and sat on the catwalk of the bridge,

"Sit yourself down,

I will tell you what happened."

You told me something special about one friend of yours.

His heart stopped beating in a accident,

"He is the only son in his family,

his mother was almost mad with grief when she knew his son died."

You were on the verge of tears,

I wiped your tears away with my hands.

I huged you tightly on my chest,

"I understand your mood."

you held my hands softly,

"Thank you for understanding."

You snuggled up to me and listening my song,

"I like having you around,

to see the turtle swimming in the sea,

to lying on the beach,

and saturate in sunshine.

to see the breaking waves left the beach covered with foam.

Let us be lazy just lying around on the beach all day,

let our ship ground on a sandbank.

you will never feel lonely,

I also never feel unhappy,

until you are a very old man,

I become a gray woman.

I like having you around,

you like having me around.

......"

Copyright © holy ... [ 2008-05-30 14:43:41]
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Re: Take care of yourself (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 31st May 2008 @ 04:22:03 AM AEST
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Oh my friend another precious write. You take us into a conversation between two hearts and they are so lovely.

Michelle

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