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Array ( [sid] => 142948 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It Hurts [time] => 2008-06-04 06:32:39 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It hurts to miss you like I do, It hurts me to know what you've been through.

It's unbelievable that this has happened, It's unreal how our lives have saddened,
It sorrowed my heart the day we had to part,
It hardened my softness, there is so much left to say.

It's unbearable to think of all the things I've missed,
It's unthinkable to know you're not here for me to kiss,
It devastates me so, I cry at night, It's shocking to know that this is oh-so-real.

It's so sad to think about how you must feel,
It breaks my heart to not see you hard at play,
It burdens my spirit, life shouldn't have to be this way.

It's tearing me up not having you here, It's torture to think that I'll miss another year,
It worries me to wonder if you'll remember me,
It's dealing without hugging and kissing you all of the time,
It's living without the embrace of comfort, with you on my mind.

It crushes me to wonder if again we'll someday meet,
It kills me to realize that I can't hear the sound of your running feet,
It's knowing that you're not sure that I even care.

It hurts to STILL miss you like I do, It hurts to see what you're STILL going through. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Mistee [notes] => Edited for spelling, as requested. - Moderator_14 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
It Hurts

Contributed by Mistee on Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 06:32:39 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



It hurts to miss you like I do, It hurts me to know what you've been through.

It's unbelievable that this has happened, It's unreal how our lives have saddened,
It sorrowed my heart the day we had to part,
It hardened my softness, there is so much left to say.

It's unbearable to think of all the things I've missed,
It's unthinkable to know you're not here for me to kiss,
It devastates me so, I cry at night, It's shocking to know that this is oh-so-real.

It's so sad to think about how you must feel,
It breaks my heart to not see you hard at play,
It burdens my spirit, life shouldn't have to be this way.

It's tearing me up not having you here, It's torture to think that I'll miss another year,
It worries me to wonder if you'll remember me,
It's dealing without hugging and kissing you all of the time,
It's living without the embrace of comfort, with you on my mind.

It crushes me to wonder if again we'll someday meet,
It kills me to realize that I can't hear the sound of your running feet,
It's knowing that you're not sure that I even care.

It hurts to STILL miss you like I do, It hurts to see what you're STILL going through.




Copyright © Mistee ... [ 2008-06-04 06:32:39]
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Re: It Hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 10:07:48 AM AEST
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This is haert wrenching but awesome writing.
At first I thought it was about an adult but realized it's a child.
I've never lost a child but I am estranged from one of my gradson's so I can imagene how much more it would be your own child. My youngest daughters goes thru this.
I don't understand it but I do know what the emptyness feels like and the what if's etc.
Big luv, huggs, faith, hope, prayer, peace, joy,
emy


Re: It Hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 02:01:33 AM AEST
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Heart breaking write, I can understand your heart ache too. In more ways than one.

I hope things mend for you.

Michelle




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