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Array ( [sid] => 143257 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sorrows of my Mind [time] => 2008-06-16 03:50:26 [hometext] => I hope you like it [bodytext] => I walk a lonely road
In this desolute and depressing life of mine
What fun do i have
Where is my big break?

I am not too much to look at
But the personality and immagination is there
Will anyone look for me, or even give me a first or second glance?
Is there something wrong with me?

What does the future hold for me?
Will i get chances at a better life?
Will i be a nobody?
Will anyone know my name?

Who watches over me , where is my protector and guide?
Who cares and loves me, does nobody?
Even i need a shoulder to cry on once in a while
Someone to hold Me tight and chase away all the hurt and pain
someone to be my champion and protector,
to keep me strong and on my feet, and protect me from the dark
Will anybody answer the call?

Or will i just live and die alone and unloved?
Forever in my own imagination
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Sorrows of my Mind

Contributed by queenofcamelot on Monday, 16th June 2008 @ 03:50:26 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I walk a lonely road
In this desolute and depressing life of mine
What fun do i have
Where is my big break?

I am not too much to look at
But the personality and immagination is there
Will anyone look for me, or even give me a first or second glance?
Is there something wrong with me?

What does the future hold for me?
Will i get chances at a better life?
Will i be a nobody?
Will anyone know my name?

Who watches over me , where is my protector and guide?
Who cares and loves me, does nobody?
Even i need a shoulder to cry on once in a while
Someone to hold Me tight and chase away all the hurt and pain
someone to be my champion and protector,
to keep me strong and on my feet, and protect me from the dark
Will anybody answer the call?

Or will i just live and die alone and unloved?
Forever in my own imagination

Copyright © queenofcamelot ... [ 2008-06-16 03:50:26]
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Re: Sorrows of my Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 16th June 2008 @ 06:43:25 AM AEST
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Well there's one thing I know is that you a re a great writer.
Awesome work.
Huggs, blessings,
emy
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Re: Sorrows of my Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by eternalsunshine on Monday, 16th June 2008 @ 09:20:29 AM AEST
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hey
nice flow of words, enjoyed it a lot
cheer up you are loved ;)
love, peace and happiness to you...

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