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Array ( [sid] => 14346 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Missed [time] => 2003-03-15 14:20:00 [hometext] => This is written for my dad. [bodytext] => All the hurt inside,
It's caused by you.
Merry go round ride,
Where you don't speak true.

I don't know what you mean,
Your signals are mixed.
I know I'm just a teen,
But why can't you stay fixed?

One minute your happy,
The next your sad,
Treating me real crappy,
I thought you were my dad.

You don't want to fight,
But nothing's good enough,
You rule with your might,
And if we don't like it, tough.

You used to be ok,
You used to really care,
But now you've gone away,
Your not really there.

Problems at your work,
You brought to your home,
Around the house you lurk,
Creating a stiffling tomb.

I don't know what's wrong.
But I know that I can't assist,
You've been gone far to long,
And your really missed. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 235 [topic] => 43 [informant] => yellow_sundragon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Missed

Contributed by yellow_sundragon on Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 02:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

All the hurt inside,
It's caused by you.
Merry go round ride,
Where you don't speak true.

I don't know what you mean,
Your signals are mixed.
I know I'm just a teen,
But why can't you stay fixed?

One minute your happy,
The next your sad,
Treating me real crappy,
I thought you were my dad.

You don't want to fight,
But nothing's good enough,
You rule with your might,
And if we don't like it, tough.

You used to be ok,
You used to really care,
But now you've gone away,
Your not really there.

Problems at your work,
You brought to your home,
Around the house you lurk,
Creating a stiffling tomb.

I don't know what's wrong.
But I know that I can't assist,
You've been gone far to long,
And your really missed.

Copyright © yellow_sundragon ... [ 2003-03-15 14:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Missed (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 12:38:05 AM AEST
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This is a great poem - the rhyming is excellent too. I hope your Dad reads this message - it should make him sit up and take note. I hope so for your sake. ... Jan

Re: Missed (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 07:05:17 PM AEST
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awww...

Re: Missed (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 03:36:14 AM AEST
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this is an excellent write.... you definitely should show this to your father (if you think he is open-minded enough)... it may shed some light on him... especially the last line... blessings...

Re: Missed (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 11:02:32 AM AEST
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Hey there Girly............just letting you know that things are going to be fine one day,that's one of the reason that I am not in the picture anymore....you need your dad more than I.

You sure can put your thoughts to paper.

Way to go girl.....hugs to ya

*G*

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