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Do You Dare?
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 05:12:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Do You Dare?
I ventured out today at three in the morn
Off in the distance I heard a fading car horn
The streets were eerily filled with fog
A few blocks away was a barking dog
This morning I am walking on the road less taken
Visiting my past and those days that were forsaken
It all quickly becomes so crystal clear
Why I keep them hidden away, yet they are so near
Each one a reminder of the days I cannot relive
Of the pains I have endured, never to forgive
How could these things have happened to me?
Better yet, how has this shaped me into the man you see?
I have strolled to the place where even angels fear to tread
Exploring the dark canyons deep inside of my own head
Demons and deceit and hatred abound
Death and sadness cast their shadows all around
Is there anyone who holds the light?
To brighten the way and make things right
Does anyone dare to enter this domain?
When the fog lifts what will remain?
Deadwriter
06/26/2008
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Re: Do You Dare?
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by ingeniusidiot on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 05:23:08 AM AEST
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Yet another brilliantly written piece. And the last stanza...a question I ask myself all too often.
You have done yet again a fine job.
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Re: Do You Dare?
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 06:11:48 AM AEST
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Another great write, my friend..
I am also curious as to what will remain after the fogs lifts for me...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Do You Dare?
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by shelby on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 09:52:52 AM AEST
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In answer of the question, yes i do dare.*smiles*
This write captured so many things. I do declare another perfect write.
Are we all walking in a fog?
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Do You Dare?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 11:17:29 AM AEST
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| Dude, you hit it with this one. Such magic in the way your words flow. Awesome write. Awesome!!!.............Mike |
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Re: Do You Dare?
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by holy on
Monday, 30th June 2008 @ 03:08:43 PM AEST
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| All the rhythm from your poem are very great,i admire you so much. |
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