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Array ( [sid] => 143535 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Love You [time] => 2008-06-27 09:49:19 [hometext] => this poem is about true love [bodytext] => I stand before you with my heart in my hands.
Nevermind the scars and the wounds that have not yet healed.
The missing pieces, or the thorns that have begun to grow around it.
Or even the knife that you see sticking out at the back.
You see, i got it from a friend of mine...no sentiments attached.
The latest to my injuries though, is that little arrow in the middle
of what's left of my heart.
The kid who did it said that all was not lost.
He described a young man to me, said i should give it to him...
he would know what to do.
So here i am...
my heart in my hands,
because that young man is you. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 256 [topic] => 2 [informant] => blk_woman4u [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

I Love You

Contributed by blk_woman4u on Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 09:49:19 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I stand before you with my heart in my hands.
Nevermind the scars and the wounds that have not yet healed.
The missing pieces, or the thorns that have begun to grow around it.
Or even the knife that you see sticking out at the back.
You see, i got it from a friend of mine...no sentiments attached.
The latest to my injuries though, is that little arrow in the middle
of what's left of my heart.
The kid who did it said that all was not lost.
He described a young man to me, said i should give it to him...
he would know what to do.
So here i am...
my heart in my hands,
because that young man is you.

Copyright © blk_woman4u ... [ 2008-06-27 09:49:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 27th June 2008 @ 12:04:16 PM AEST
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Awww this is very cute..... I especially loved this line-->
"The latest to my injuries though, is that little arrow in the middle
of what's left of my heart."

Welcome to YPDC...Hope to see more of your work..
Jenni

Re: I Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 11:45:26 AM AEST
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Heart felt write here. I enjoyed it.
Welcome to ypdc

Michelle

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