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You are contemplating what screen will freeze next.
All is dim, revealing the shadows of a secretive new passage,
Your surrounding perceptions have started to close in.
Climbing the ladder that reflects burrows all through the skies,
You choose to question the flaming intention inside.
Diversion of possibilities flood through the enchantment around you,
The music will guard over the depths of your soul.
An roller coaster of insanity blindfolds logic and reasoning,
A fresh slave to feed from all of your wounds.
Persistent is the rush that can define each drifted new beginning,
You begin to lose another questioned breath.
Calmer, now the heavens glisten beneath the tracks of clear perspective,
Your mind has been put into trance, life has just begun. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 21 [informant] => XXXsilvervoodooXXX [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

A Trance

Contributed by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 08:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Reaching through a mist of illusion, the air waving each hidden depth,
You are contemplating what screen will freeze next.
All is dim, revealing the shadows of a secretive new passage,
Your surrounding perceptions have started to close in.
Climbing the ladder that reflects burrows all through the skies,
You choose to question the flaming intention inside.
Diversion of possibilities flood through the enchantment around you,
The music will guard over the depths of your soul.
An roller coaster of insanity blindfolds logic and reasoning,
A fresh slave to feed from all of your wounds.
Persistent is the rush that can define each drifted new beginning,
You begin to lose another questioned breath.
Calmer, now the heavens glisten beneath the tracks of clear perspective,
Your mind has been put into trance, life has just begun.

Copyright © XXXsilvervoodooXXX ... [ 2003-03-16 20:40:00]
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Re: A Trance (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 08:47:23 PM AEST
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Hmm...Interesting....
Jenni

Re: A Trance (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 09:17:32 PM AEST
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had to read more than once found it interesting.

Sharon

Re: A Trance (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 09:20:52 PM AEST
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gives a floating feeling reading this....like you were in deep thought...

Re: A Trance (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 03:54:30 AM AEST
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Damn this thing, the last four lines wrap the poem very neatly. venkat

Re: A Trance (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 09:12:55 AM AEST
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Wow... that's awesome! I agree with ladyfawn, definately a floating feeling to it!

Keep it up!

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