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Array ( [sid] => 143603 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One Word [time] => 2008-07-01 03:45:31 [hometext] => Kiss me sweet kills me. [bodytext] => How should I describe
the way she taunts me?

They way she lingers in my doorway,
like a ghost,
and remains in the back of my mind,

the way her smile
sends shivers up my spine.

How should I describe
the way she depraves me?

The way she makes me beg
for desperation

because I don't know how
to live without it.

How should I describe
the way she tricks me?

The way her promises
never break

the way she gives less
than she takes

how should I describe
how she becomes everything.

The way she never loses her charm,
the way she way she always gets the best of me. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Forgotten_soul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

One Word

Contributed by Forgotten_soul on Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 03:45:31 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

How should I describe
the way she taunts me?

They way she lingers in my doorway,
like a ghost,
and remains in the back of my mind,

the way her smile
sends shivers up my spine.

How should I describe
the way she depraves me?

The way she makes me beg
for desperation

because I don't know how
to live without it.

How should I describe
the way she tricks me?

The way her promises
never break

the way she gives less
than she takes

how should I describe
how she becomes everything.

The way she never loses her charm,
the way she way she always gets the best of me.

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Re: One Word (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 05:31:51 AM AEST
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i am definitely in love with this poem. its fantastic, great job buddy!!!! :]

Re: One Word (User Rating: 1 )
by Nothingness on Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 09:34:12 AM AEST
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Hey!, Beautiful write, so glad to see you are still writing! I haven't been around for a long long time but it was such a sweet suprise to see you are still writting amazing poems. Really nice write I loved it.

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