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The hands that hold my heart.
The smile that brightens up my day,
and sets him apart from the world.

I hold him,
touch him,
Kiss him.
My soul is free
within him.

I Feel nothing but love,
flowing freely between us.
Sweet satryasis.
The path of life
opens up before us.

My wildest dreams could not imagine,
a kinder soul than he.
As life moves on I make a vow,
that together we will always be.
Forever in love,
by the sea.

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The Path

Contributed by Thespia on Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 12:13:25 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Soft raven hair and deep dark eyes.
The hands that hold my heart.
The smile that brightens up my day,
and sets him apart from the world.

I hold him,
touch him,
Kiss him.
My soul is free
within him.

I Feel nothing but love,
flowing freely between us.
Sweet satryasis.
The path of life
opens up before us.

My wildest dreams could not imagine,
a kinder soul than he.
As life moves on I make a vow,
that together we will always be.
Forever in love,
by the sea.

Copyright © Thespia ... [ 2008-07-08 00:13:25]
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Re: The Path (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 01:18:43 AM AEST
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well written, with heart,,
a friend in words ,,spooky

Re: The Path (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 01:36:59 AM AEST
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beautifully done,

glad you decide to write again, keep posting!!

wiz

Re: The Path (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 01:42:07 AM AEST
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I am so happy to see you post again.It is evident that this was written from the heart and that is is what best poetry is about...
Hugs
Jenni

Re: The Path (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 02:17:35 AM AEST
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Very moving piece. Great write.....Mike

Re: The Path (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 03:13:43 AM AEST
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You have a beautiful and heartfelt piece here.
And I have to agree that all of the best poetry comes from the heart. Once again beautiful piece.

Rich

Re: The Path (User Rating: 1 )
by KY on Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 05:58:24 AM AEST
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the most amazing poetry is poetry that comes from the heart, this is so sweet and very heartfelt.
very nice write.

Re: The Path (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 06:55:29 AM AEST
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i feel in this write the love you have for him he is a lucky man great post its nice to see you writing again
regan aka lostrelic

Re: The Path (User Rating: 1 )
by Shattered_soul on Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 09:51:00 AM AEST
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enjoyable.
your last stanza remided me of annabell lee by edgar allen poe.

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