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Array ( [sid] => 143765 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I give up [time] => 2008-07-08 13:38:38 [hometext] => [bodytext] => This isn't how I pictured my life

thinking about death and wanting to die.

I was happy and free like a kite

or so I thought but its only a lie.

It all started when I became a teen

and life got confusing and I felt blue.

everyone around you feels like their mean,

but really, they are just ignoring you.

On the outside I smiled a lot

but inside I frowned more.
I couldn't really connect the dots,

what was I living for?

Sometimes I would picture myself dying

and it actually would calm me down.

You still reading this, you think I'm lying?

I feel like I was beat into the ground.

I lie awake at night thinking it through

if killing myself would be wrong.

Do you know what its like to feel blue,

do you think I'm just singing a sad song?

Well tonight is the night you will see

I sit here telling you this as I cry

go on, leave, forget about me

because tonight is the night I will die.

The end!

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I give up

Contributed by moose2006 on Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 01:38:38 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

This isn't how I pictured my life

thinking about death and wanting to die.

I was happy and free like a kite

or so I thought but its only a lie.

It all started when I became a teen

and life got confusing and I felt blue.

everyone around you feels like their mean,

but really, they are just ignoring you.

On the outside I smiled a lot

but inside I frowned more.
I couldn't really connect the dots,

what was I living for?

Sometimes I would picture myself dying

and it actually would calm me down.

You still reading this, you think I'm lying?

I feel like I was beat into the ground.

I lie awake at night thinking it through

if killing myself would be wrong.

Do you know what its like to feel blue,

do you think I'm just singing a sad song?

Well tonight is the night you will see

I sit here telling you this as I cry

go on, leave, forget about me

because tonight is the night I will die.

The end!

Copyright © moose2006 ... [ 2008-07-08 13:38:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I give up (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Tuesday, 8th July 2008 @ 03:17:27 PM AEST
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a sad and profound poem. it may seem suicide is the answer to life's problems, but consider a place worse than the world we live in which we call hell, and imagine the pain you would leave behind 4ever to those who care bout u. u r important to people even if they dont say it. For me, i care bout my parents, but i don't say "i love u" to them like i used to. so don't giv up, it's too easy to do that. take care and hope things will be better
-K.Z.

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