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~Have taken you many a place~
~Everything was a happy time~
~Fun round each bend~

~The body did grow weary~
~Time for you to go~
~Angels coming to take you~
~Carry you to the Heavenly Home~

~No more pain, only peace~
~No suffering just blessed rest~
~Free to be the man you always were~
~Soul restored to perfect whole~

~The mountains still your playground~
~The rivers and the streams~
~The song forever on the winds~
~ Sighing through Idaho Pine tree's~

~Your heart ceased to beat~
~Soul left your earthly form~
~Though your heart floats freely now~
~I feel you near me where I roam~

~Bless the day, I loved you dearly~
~Bless the night, and my heart so torn~
~Bless the moments sweet and tender~
~Bless you uncle on your trip back home~

I love you..........

~MIchelle~

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~Rest~

Contributed by shelby on Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 05:19:12 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

~Your adventures here on earth~
~Have taken you many a place~
~Everything was a happy time~
~Fun round each bend~

~The body did grow weary~
~Time for you to go~
~Angels coming to take you~
~Carry you to the Heavenly Home~

~No more pain, only peace~
~No suffering just blessed rest~
~Free to be the man you always were~
~Soul restored to perfect whole~

~The mountains still your playground~
~The rivers and the streams~
~The song forever on the winds~
~ Sighing through Idaho Pine tree's~

~Your heart ceased to beat~
~Soul left your earthly form~
~Though your heart floats freely now~
~I feel you near me where I roam~

~Bless the day, I loved you dearly~
~Bless the night, and my heart so torn~
~Bless the moments sweet and tender~
~Bless you uncle on your trip back home~

I love you..........

~MIchelle~

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2008-07-09 05:19:12]
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Re: ~Rest~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 09:25:43 AM AEST
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Michelle, the last stanza is glorious! So painfully beautiful.
Sounds like an extraordinary man. Thanks for sharing this.

You and those you love are in my prayers. Take care hun ~

*ginormous hugs*

~Breezy

Re: ~Rest~ (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 04:31:06 PM AEST
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beautiful my friend

Shari

Re: ~Rest~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 11:58:29 PM AEST
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Truly beautiful and as I have said I am so very sorry for your loss. And I have to agree that the last stanza was brilliant. Your uncle sounds like he was an amazing man.

you are always in my prayers.
~hugs~
Rich

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