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How This Feels So Right
Contributed by
ZiggyB
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Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 08:44:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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How This Feels So Right
Cant tell you, how this feels so right My being here with you tonight And from your arms I will not be wrestled Its deep within them I am nestled
Could someone tell me does it show How this became so natural Would there be those to stop and stare Have we the mindset to beware
And as we look we just may find With eyes wide open still were blind Much like the hand that wears a glove Its hard to see beyond this love
Now it moves us near, to lascivious And its of the others were impervious For as we hold each other tight Cant tell you, how this feels so right
~~*~~ 2008-07-06
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Re: How This Feels So Right
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th July 2008 @ 11:47:40 PM AEST (User
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Omigosh! (I'm so jealous)
This piece is so wonderfully emotive and filled with a sensational beauty that
I can't get enough of! Being with the one that makes your pulse race and your
heart skip has got to be the best feeling, comparable to NOTHING on earth!!
You captured the bliss it is to know another's charms and to be locked up
within them. *sigh* I envy you this right now ...
Lovely post, Z ~
~Breezy
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Re: How This Feels So Right
(User Rating: 1 ) by GreenEves16 on
Thursday, 10th July 2008 @ 06:52:36 AM AEST (User
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good poem
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Re: How This Feels So Right
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th July 2008 @ 11:21:43 AM AEST (User
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Hey Ziggy, I hope the feeling is mutual.
Great write.........Mike |
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