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Please, Just Learn
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Sunday, 13th July 2008 @ 02:49:54 AM in AEST
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Why are you so stupid?
I know you like that stuff
But why wont you realize
That the road is pretty rough?
Yet again you have made
Tears fall down my face.
Worry emits itself from me,
Speeds up my hearts pace.
Fear grips my soul,
For if I were to lose you,
I would be empty and lost;
I wouldnt have a clue.
You are my brother.
And you are a huge part
Of what makes my world:
Of what makes my heart.
Please, will you just learn
To live with more care?
If not for you, for me?
So we can stay a pair.
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sprinter27
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2008-07-13 02:49:54]
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Re: Please, Just Learn
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th August 2008 @ 04:02:03 AM AEST
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An adorable write about the love of a sibling who seems also to be a closest friend. He should take heed for sometimes it is more important to live for the one's who need you than to die for the thrills one needs.
BRAVO!
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