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Array ( [sid] => 143886 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Brown Eyes [time] => 2008-07-13 22:44:57 [hometext] => [bodytext] => There is a lot to see behind her brown eyes:
A snarled past and a bunch of lies.
Whether people believe that or not, it is unclear.
She’s been fighting now, for half a year.

Behind her brown eyes are things people refuse to see.
She walks around, blindly,
Denying that she is in pain.
However, she fears she is no longer sane.

Lost in the dark,
Letting people leave their own unique mark.
Drowning in her own tears,
Trying to escape from her worst fears.

Fighting her way back up to the top,
She wonders when the pain and suffering shall stop.
As the darkness presses down around her,
Threatening to smother her forever,
She sees one face,
The one that brought with him revile and disgrace.
She can’t change her ugly past,
But she can know that the pain will not forever last.
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Brown Eyes

Contributed by Bubbles02 on Sunday, 13th July 2008 @ 10:44:57 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

There is a lot to see behind her brown eyes:
A snarled past and a bunch of lies.
Whether people believe that or not, it is unclear.
She’s been fighting now, for half a year.

Behind her brown eyes are things people refuse to see.
She walks around, blindly,
Denying that she is in pain.
However, she fears she is no longer sane.

Lost in the dark,
Letting people leave their own unique mark.
Drowning in her own tears,
Trying to escape from her worst fears.

Fighting her way back up to the top,
She wonders when the pain and suffering shall stop.
As the darkness presses down around her,
Threatening to smother her forever,
She sees one face,
The one that brought with him revile and disgrace.
She can’t change her ugly past,
But she can know that the pain will not forever last.

Copyright Â© Bubbles02 ... [ 2008-07-13 22:44:57]
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Re: Brown Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by ratty on Monday, 14th July 2008 @ 01:51:57 AM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this. Nice one.....!!

Re: Brown Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 12:29:40 AM AEST
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I like the way this flows

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