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at the end of each a rusty door.
No key no knob just old and nasty
behind it another solid brick wall.

No fresh wood or polish
no key, no light no more
no turning point or other side
just black halls and those ugly rusty doors.

Creaking floors, creaking hearts
be careful where you step.
Valleys no peaks at the ending
just old and ugly rusty doors.

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~Rusty Doors~

Contributed by shelby on Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 04:57:22 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Halls of dark long and unforgiving
at the end of each a rusty door.
No key no knob just old and nasty
behind it another solid brick wall.

No fresh wood or polish
no key, no light no more
no turning point or other side
just black halls and those ugly rusty doors.

Creaking floors, creaking hearts
be careful where you step.
Valleys no peaks at the ending
just old and ugly rusty doors.

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2008-07-15 04:57:22]
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Re: ~Rusty Doors~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 05:31:26 AM AEST
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Kinda reminds me of how my mind used to seem to me...so many doors that i hadnt opened in such a long time that they were old a rusted...alot of them so much so that they were rusted shut...I liked your imagery with this piece..I liked it...

Rich

Re: ~Rusty Doors~ (User Rating: 1 )
by wheels on Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 07:41:59 AM AEST
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I love you michelle - you are such a dear.
damn those FN doors. I love this poem beyond words. You are a true friend - I wish you only the best.. May light replace the rust and the doors be those of opppurtunity.

The poem is superb in its imagry and it thougt

--Kevin
the forever loney vagabond

Re: ~Rusty Doors~ (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 07:42:34 AM AEST
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haunting write

shari

Re: ~Rusty Doors~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 08:03:35 AM AEST
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Good imagery....
Jenni

Re: ~Rusty Doors~ (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 08:53:06 AM AEST
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I enjoyed your poem. It made me feel sad and hopeless....like all hope was gone, forever.

If this is truly the state of your heart I wish you peace and happiness.

A very emotionally stirring piece.

Thanks for sharing it!
Carol

Re: ~Rusty Doors~ (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 09:11:53 AM AEST
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this is very depressing but well written.

Re: ~Rusty Doors~ (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 11:46:15 AM AEST
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this is very well written.. I enjoyed it.. it could refer to alot of things or aspects of life.. lovely job

rock on,

vampyress Jenni

Re: ~Rusty Doors~ (User Rating: 1 )
by recklessguy on Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 03:00:16 AM AEST
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Guess I gonna need to wind up the kit cat and run down some rusty doors darlin.
You are to damn pretty to be blue darlin.
10-4
kiss and a rose of red
Me

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