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Array ( [sid] => 143930 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => a thought inside the dream(just educating self salvation) [time] => 2008-07-15 21:05:09 [hometext] => where they cant read [bodytext] => Will anyone stop and listen to me?

I've been seen
inside my dream
Watching you
Waiting

And I gleamed
one day you would
witness me

Now, I wonder
if what seems
could really be true

It's been so long
I hasitate if it's really you

Now I wonder
If I'll be your only home

I know for you
I'd never be alone

Come on hear me
I want to be with you
I just want to breathe
inside the ******* dream
inside that thing
That tells me
I am yours

I am scared
Tell me, I'm yours

And what you deserve?
Am I,
Am I ******* your?

Tell me
Tell me
I am yours

break this cycle
let me know
you need me
for i'm that ghost
that kept the city
And most.....

I am the one that keeps
your....

come on girl
tell me

I know I'm a ****
a ***** foot
A trigger *****
A gnostic symbol
of a voice so silent
sadly sounding south

Come on baby
tell me the truth [comments] => 2 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Rhei76 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

a thought inside the dream(just educating self salvation)

Contributed by Rhei76 on Tuesday, 15th July 2008 @ 09:05:09 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Will anyone stop and listen to me?

I've been seen
inside my dream
Watching you
Waiting

And I gleamed
one day you would
witness me

Now, I wonder
if what seems
could really be true

It's been so long
I hasitate if it's really you

Now I wonder
If I'll be your only home

I know for you
I'd never be alone

Come on hear me
I want to be with you
I just want to breathe
inside the ******* dream
inside that thing
That tells me
I am yours

I am scared
Tell me, I'm yours

And what you deserve?
Am I,
Am I ******* your?

Tell me
Tell me
I am yours

break this cycle
let me know
you need me
for i'm that ghost
that kept the city
And most.....

I am the one that keeps
your....

come on girl
tell me

I know I'm a ****
a ***** foot
A trigger *****
A gnostic symbol
of a voice so silent
sadly sounding south

Come on baby
tell me the truth

Copyright © Rhei76 ... [ 2008-07-15 21:05:09]
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Re: a thought inside the dream(just educating self salvation) (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 09:01:12 AM AEST
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Fine. . . really fine. peace. elle

Re: a thought inside the dream(just educating self salvation) (User Rating: 1 )
by sorrowsofabrokenheart on Wednesday, 16th July 2008 @ 04:47:23 PM AEST
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if you were wanting to know the answere to the question you should not ask to valgerly. good write though. :)

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