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Making Love
Contributed by
wheels
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Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 11:27:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Tasting you upon my tongue
My face into the valley
The spring upon which youth is born
Salty musky passion upon my pallet.
To taste your soul to feel your tremble
To feel you quiver with desire
To have me inside you
My tongue inside the petals of love.
Then to pierce the passion
With a passion from below
Undulating in circular motion
tis more than a moment shallow in the stream
tis a passion of heart
Mine into yours
Yours wrapped tightly about mine
Convulsing
Gripping.
Convulsing
In a moment where wallows
The next
Whence nothing else matters
cept your tremble in my arms
Your breathless exhale into mine
Mine into yours.
Yes
It is nothing till this passion felt
Nothing till my dire resolve
To have you on that plateau
Whereby you cry
And tremble like the earth
Giving forth a stream
Wet with your soul
Wet with your passion
Wet upon my tongue.
Nothing but your
Ecstasy that matters
Pleasure gained within your eyes
Pleasure within your sighs
Love within your arms
Trembling
Holding
Loving about my heart
Wrapped within you
Giving.
Copyright ©
wheels
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2008-07-17 11:27:55]
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Re: Making Love
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by shelby on
Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 11:58:43 AM AEST
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whoooooooo eeeeeeee is it hot in here??
This is very sensual and a lovely poem
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Making Love
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 12:31:36 PM AEST
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Wow....quite a sensual write but tastefully done....
Jenni |
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Re: Making Love
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 17th July 2008 @ 09:28:38 PM AEST
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wow an intesnse sensual passionate write.. so full of love and passion.. awesome job on this piece of work here
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Making Love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 10:18:59 AM AEST
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Oh,
my,
G O D !!!!
Good GRIEF Kevin!! I know it's July but holy heck, it's hotter than hell
in here! *fans self profusely*
Damn fine piece of sensual and arousing poetry. Such clever use of
metaphors and language. As good as any aphrodisiac I know! :P But
speaking from a completely, poetic point of view, hot damn!
This was so beautifully 'rapturous. Your work seems to continually
reach a bit further each and every time, showing what length of
talent you possess. Always moving me just past the edge of "enough",
if you know what I mean. Delightful and sooooooo sensationally stimulating.
(the alliteration above was unintentional. lol)
Great post! I am blown away!!
~Breezy
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Re: Making Love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th July 2008 @ 01:44:06 PM AEST
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LOL,
I don't mean to laugh Kevin, but I was going write something similar and title it " The Button" and see who figured out what I was talking about. Too funny....great write..........Mike |
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