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Meet near the old oak tree.
Bought the strike of midnight
lets go sail just you and me.

We could take a little nap sack
and gather up the star-dust
spread the magic around us
off to the milky way we would go.

Float with the stars lining Heavens doorway.
Tell our secrets to the moon.
Bask in the glittering twilight
morn could come to soon.

So what do you say about it?
Would you like to come along
we could be the light and twinkle
make a brand new song.

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~Twinkle Twinkle~

Contributed by shelby on Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 03:27:50 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Are you ready for an adventure?
Meet near the old oak tree.
Bought the strike of midnight
lets go sail just you and me.

We could take a little nap sack
and gather up the star-dust
spread the magic around us
off to the milky way we would go.

Float with the stars lining Heavens doorway.
Tell our secrets to the moon.
Bask in the glittering twilight
morn could come to soon.

So what do you say about it?
Would you like to come along
we could be the light and twinkle
make a brand new song.

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2008-07-19 15:27:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ~Twinkle Twinkle~ (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 03:37:59 PM AEST
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aww this is just so mystical.. I just loved this write.. its so adventerous lovely one

rock on,

vampyress Jenni

Re: ~Twinkle Twinkle~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 03:45:22 PM AEST
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Wow, I love this. It is so free and feel-good... and romantic! The imagery is perfect and I imagine the words spoken with a sly smile. Thank you!

Re: ~Twinkle Twinkle~ (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Saturday, 19th July 2008 @ 06:49:11 PM AEST
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shine on little star

Shari

Re: ~Twinkle Twinkle~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 12:56:49 PM AEST
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Sweet little piece Michelle. The imagery is
wonderful.

'Tell our secrets to the moon'

Fits this piece so well. It gives one
butterflies inside......Mike

Re: ~Twinkle Twinkle~ (User Rating: 1 )
by breezyweezy on Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 01:13:28 PM AEST
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this is a cute poem, good job
-briana

Re: ~Twinkle Twinkle~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Monday, 21st July 2008 @ 09:04:19 PM AEST
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Pretty little piece...sounds like a place I would love to go to escape from everything for a while. This was beautiful.

Rich

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