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Array ( [sid] => 14410 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Depressed Ghost [time] => 2003-03-17 14:20:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Does everyone have more fun when I'm not around
When I'm seen do less people smile than those who frown
Some say "He's a cool guy, someone we have fun with"
Most say "He's a loner, an anti-socialist, a piece of *****"
Is my existance a shadow on your reality
Have my negative words caused a fatality
Maybe it would be better if I never was
Living in this world of confused emotions
The emotional overload is too much for me
So I shut it away where no one else can see
And no one does see it, only a black hole for feelings remains
But every black hole that sucks up matter has to hold it in
I can only hold mine in vain
For in time I will cease to be a nether wraith
And become a flaming inferno of emotions
But only for a time, just enough to empty them out
Then I will revert to my dark shade form
Holding it all inside, never letting it go
So people think I don't care cause I never show
My feelings in front of them
They come to know me as the Depressed Ghost
I say this not to boast, just to open further the eyes of those I love most [comments] => 2 [counter] => 784 [topic] => 32 [informant] => TundraHydra [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Depressed Ghost

Contributed by TundraHydra on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 02:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Does everyone have more fun when I'm not around
When I'm seen do less people smile than those who frown
Some say "He's a cool guy, someone we have fun with"
Most say "He's a loner, an anti-socialist, a piece of *****"
Is my existance a shadow on your reality
Have my negative words caused a fatality
Maybe it would be better if I never was
Living in this world of confused emotions
The emotional overload is too much for me
So I shut it away where no one else can see
And no one does see it, only a black hole for feelings remains
But every black hole that sucks up matter has to hold it in
I can only hold mine in vain
For in time I will cease to be a nether wraith
And become a flaming inferno of emotions
But only for a time, just enough to empty them out
Then I will revert to my dark shade form
Holding it all inside, never letting it go
So people think I don't care cause I never show
My feelings in front of them
They come to know me as the Depressed Ghost
I say this not to boast, just to open further the eyes of those I love most




Copyright © TundraHydra ... [ 2003-03-17 14:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Depressed Ghost (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 10:06:50 PM AEST
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AAAHHH Truly a good write,you need to let your feeling show at times! Christina


Re: Depressed Ghost (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 07:27:20 AM AEST
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Wow! This has to be my favourite of all your works so far. Wonderful imagery!!

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