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Array ( [sid] => 144133 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Polished Souls~ [time] => 2008-07-24 14:45:22 [hometext] => cowrite Crow/ Shelby Michelle and Lane [bodytext] => I just go with the flow
tired of treading
tired of bending the ends to meet.
I cannot turn pathways to gold
or part the ocean
there is not the big of savior in me.

I just need to sit and whisper to the breeze.

Taste the world at a distance
hold onto the wind
comb the suns rays through my hair
the carmel sky drowns my worries
painting my thoughts by numbers
no worry about the game.

I want to list each good thing,
and weigh just that.
Let me be charcoal on white
let me by the blush of mid day
let me be the thunder and rain that is over today
and the vine that clings to everything but nothing at all.

A new path and a old path, stitched tightly together
a place in the dust
no one ever walked
the shift of the sands
and brushes with stone
pebbles glossed over
beneath crystalline water
smoothed by the years
smoothed and set.
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~Polished Souls~

Contributed by shelby on Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 02:45:22 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I just go with the flow
tired of treading
tired of bending the ends to meet.
I cannot turn pathways to gold
or part the ocean
there is not the big of savior in me.

I just need to sit and whisper to the breeze.

Taste the world at a distance
hold onto the wind
comb the suns rays through my hair
the carmel sky drowns my worries
painting my thoughts by numbers
no worry about the game.

I want to list each good thing,
and weigh just that.
Let me be charcoal on white
let me by the blush of mid day
let me be the thunder and rain that is over today
and the vine that clings to everything but nothing at all.

A new path and a old path, stitched tightly together
a place in the dust
no one ever walked
the shift of the sands
and brushes with stone
pebbles glossed over
beneath crystalline water
smoothed by the years
smoothed and set.

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2008-07-24 14:45:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ~Polished Souls~ (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 08:34:53 PM AEST
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you two blend together well

Shari

Re: ~Polished Souls~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 12:58:04 AM AEST
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my friend this write is mostly you" I thank you for letting me in on it. I enjoy writing with you so much. love ya! Lane

Re: ~Polished Souls~ (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 09:26:06 AM AEST
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you guys always write such intense and powerful stuff together.. this is another wonderful write from you both.. lovely!!

rock on,

vampyress Jenni

Re: ~Polished Souls~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 12:49:53 PM AEST
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I agree, this is very beautiful. The imagery is soothing and your two minds could be one.

Re: ~Polished Souls~ (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 25th July 2008 @ 01:41:55 PM AEST
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Oh no my Crow it is as much you as it is I and boy didnt this turn out raw power whooooooo hooooooo.
Thanks you I do also love the time spent with you and writing is just part of it!

love you
hugs n kisses

Michelle

Thanks Shari and everyone love you too!

Re: ~Polished Souls~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 10:22:34 AM AEST
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Crow and Shelby.. when you two write together, there is never a moment that it would
be considered that two people actually wrote it. Always there is a cohesiveness that
tricks the reader into believing this is from a solitary mind. Brilliant continuity of thought!

I ADORE this ...

"Let me be charcoal on white
let me by the blush of mid day
let me be the thunder and rain that is over today
and the vine that clings to everything but nothing at all."

DAMN fine poetry you two!! Simply beautiful!

~ Breezy

Re: ~Polished Souls~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 09:27:27 PM AEST
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when you two write together there is no comparison. Yet again another write that absorbs the reader and takes them to a place where the soul want to stay forever. Another beautiful piece.

Rich

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