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Passion Thus With Sara

I sigh longingly
At the breezy chill of spring
And lay down upon the lonely pier
Quilted in green moss
And golden threads of satin.
Gazing into sea green waters
My head rests upon her mooring
My arm burning ‘neath the ripples.
Stretched out upon her bedside
Her arms held out
Longing and lonely…
Lonely…
And longing.

The waves rolled closer
Casting dark her tresses
Coolly about my arms
In smooth raven whispers
I took hold within my hand
And pulled gentle back her head
To rest my lips upon her chest
And she came
Wanting to engulf me
Trembling in the breeze
Swaying in my passion.

I gazed along the curves
The sleekness of her back
And saw her lips aquiver
My mouth taking in
The small upon her there
Slowly circling spirals
Gentle up her spine
Upon the horizon of her
Upon the musk of passion
Served upon her skin
Wanting only this
Serving that is her.

My hands around her front
Stretching 'cross the smooth and rolling sands
Forming supple hills
Breathing tan within an autumn sunset
And felt the warmth within her
As the earth trembled in response
Wanting to break free
Of her summer clothing
And lay naked by my side
As spoons beneath the covers
Rolling waves upon the sea
Crashing on the beach.

The tide is thus an undertow
Much too strong to swim
Ripping out to sea
Dragging deep our passion
Pulling down on me
Her warmth to wrap me firmly
Deep within her seas.

Poseidon full upon us
His wisdom pounds in waves
Painful in her chest
And she can only lay
Drowning in her thoughts
Wrapped within my shores
Feeling at the currents
Stirring in her flow
Wonder when the ship
Shall wreck and make her whole.

But shipwrecks carry on
Like ghosts into the dusk
Traveling lonely thoughts
Sailing through the night
Sailing through her oceans
This cleft…
This curve
This sigh
Returning in the trade winds
Ghostly ships that come to rise
Resting in the eddies
Caught within our tides
Thoughts together lifting
Kiss her lips then drifting
Sleeping …
While the moonlight wanes.
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Passion Thus With Sara

Contributed by wheels on Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 08:48:47 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry




Passion Thus With Sara

I sigh longingly
At the breezy chill of spring
And lay down upon the lonely pier
Quilted in green moss
And golden threads of satin.
Gazing into sea green waters
My head rests upon her mooring
My arm burning ‘neath the ripples.
Stretched out upon her bedside
Her arms held out
Longing and lonely…
Lonely…
And longing.

The waves rolled closer
Casting dark her tresses
Coolly about my arms
In smooth raven whispers
I took hold within my hand
And pulled gentle back her head
To rest my lips upon her chest
And she came
Wanting to engulf me
Trembling in the breeze
Swaying in my passion.

I gazed along the curves
The sleekness of her back
And saw her lips aquiver
My mouth taking in
The small upon her there
Slowly circling spirals
Gentle up her spine
Upon the horizon of her
Upon the musk of passion
Served upon her skin
Wanting only this
Serving that is her.

My hands around her front
Stretching 'cross the smooth and rolling sands
Forming supple hills
Breathing tan within an autumn sunset
And felt the warmth within her
As the earth trembled in response
Wanting to break free
Of her summer clothing
And lay naked by my side
As spoons beneath the covers
Rolling waves upon the sea
Crashing on the beach.

The tide is thus an undertow
Much too strong to swim
Ripping out to sea
Dragging deep our passion
Pulling down on me
Her warmth to wrap me firmly
Deep within her seas.

Poseidon full upon us
His wisdom pounds in waves
Painful in her chest
And she can only lay
Drowning in her thoughts
Wrapped within my shores
Feeling at the currents
Stirring in her flow
Wonder when the ship
Shall wreck and make her whole.

But shipwrecks carry on
Like ghosts into the dusk
Traveling lonely thoughts
Sailing through the night
Sailing through her oceans
This cleft…
This curve
This sigh
Returning in the trade winds
Ghostly ships that come to rise
Resting in the eddies
Caught within our tides
Thoughts together lifting
Kiss her lips then drifting
Sleeping …
While the moonlight wanes.




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Re: Passion Thus With Sara (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 08:54:39 AM AEST
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Whewwwwww Kevin,
I am left speechless, my heavens this is breath taking.
Cannot chose a line to many favorites.
Heavenly!

Hugs
Michelle


Re: Passion Thus With Sara (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 09:53:58 AM AEST
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excellent...I do love the ocean symbolism

Shari


Re: Passion Thus With Sara (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 12:54:06 PM AEST
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Wow!! A magnificent write!!
I particularly liked the pier-
"...... the lonely pier
Quilted in green moss
And golden threads of satin."
Well done..I am glad you didn't leave this in the dark...

Jenni


Re: Passion Thus With Sara (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 27th July 2008 @ 01:22:52 PM AEST
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wow this is a passionate masterpiece and the wording is intense and vivid.. awesome job here

rock on,


vampyress Jenni


Re: Passion Thus With Sara (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 28th July 2008 @ 03:07:53 AM AEST
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wheels, I penned a line..beautiful wreck" once...some of the poems from your heart, that fits..

But shipwrecks carry on
Like ghosts into the dusk
Traveling lonely thoughts
Sailing through the night

amazing work. Crow


Re: Passion Thus With Sara (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 28th July 2008 @ 11:40:49 AM AEST
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Kevin,

Yet another masterpiece write.
deep in emotion and passion.
.Mike


Re: Passion Thus With Sara (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 03:17:35 AM AEST
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Good grief Kevin!!! What I have missed!!

This was so damn haunting! Beautiful, yes, but there is an eerie melancholy swimming in and around your words.
I simply ADORE the metaphors and the way you liken so much to the shore, the water, and everything that is
attached to it. You seem to be able to find a certain solace in the water that perhaps some may miss when
gazing upon the sparkling ripple of a wave.

There was a subtle and softly beautiful sensual feel to this piece. It was almost like making love to Calypso, if
that makes ANY sense. And like Odysseus, we are commanded to linger indefinitely, caught under her rapturous
spell .... damn beautiful, Kevin, even if that wasn't your intent. Poetry and what it does to the reader is so
subjective and so wonderfully diverse in meaning, no?

A beautiful piece, whatever the meaning. Thank you for sharing this one.

~ Breezy





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