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They get me through the day
I find it kind of funny
That you get to me this way

Oh and you have no clue.

The smile on your face
Drives me up the wall
I'm mad about you everyday
Ever winter, spring, summer, & fall

Oh and you don't notice a thing.

Your happiness is all that matters
All that matters to me
I would give up everything
If happy is what you'd be

Oh and you have no idea.

My tears they burn my eyes
I know you don't feel the same
So I'll pack up and walk away
I'll leave the way I came. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 265 [topic] => 22 [informant] => beautiful_letdowns [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Way I Came

Contributed by beautiful_letdowns on Monday, 28th July 2008 @ 01:50:52 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Your words are oxygen
They get me through the day
I find it kind of funny
That you get to me this way

Oh and you have no clue.

The smile on your face
Drives me up the wall
I'm mad about you everyday
Ever winter, spring, summer, & fall

Oh and you don't notice a thing.

Your happiness is all that matters
All that matters to me
I would give up everything
If happy is what you'd be

Oh and you have no idea.

My tears they burn my eyes
I know you don't feel the same
So I'll pack up and walk away
I'll leave the way I came.




Copyright © beautiful_letdowns ... [ 2008-07-28 01:50:52]
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Re: Way I Came (User Rating: 1 )
by Cayleigh-Chan on Monday, 28th July 2008 @ 03:00:54 AM AEST
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Well, you commented on mine, So I'll comment on yours! :)

I like this poem a lot. My favorite part is:

I would give up everything,
If happy is what you'd be

I don't know, that just really got to me. Keep up the good work!

~Cayleigh-chan


Re: Way I Came (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 28th July 2008 @ 03:19:15 AM AEST
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I like the way this is put together..very unique
very good read. Crow


Re: Way I Came (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 09:52:06 AM AEST
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Aint unrequited love a beep? You've captured this perfectly, I loved the indivudual lines, which were almost like asides, as though someone reading the poem to me was adding them in, sort of sarcastic like, excellent write, and I can completely empathise if this is something you're going through,

2sdy xxx


Re: Way I Came (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 10:41:29 AM AEST
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Love Hurts
and
you know it....
well done.


Re: Way I Came (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 03:32:37 PM AEST
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A great writer with full of sadness and loneliness, I wish you happiness and luck all the day.




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