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Array ( [sid] => 144260 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Hidden, Leaches, Fearfull Deity, The Curse [time] => 2008-07-30 14:30:19 [hometext] => Just 3 things I have wrote, I know punctuation is messed up and all that we'll just say im taking a mild E.E. oh wow this site sucks i cant say his last name but its Cu m m ings my fav poet ever approach!? [bodytext] => The hidden

Im always eating away at your insides
your just going to try to hide
me from everyone that you know, and love
but I dont think I will ever let you go
because it is so much fun tearing you apart
especially when I get to start in the heart
and work my way through your feeble body
and
you will never stop me, you will never know it
but im going to take all that you love and burn it
and let the ashes encase the lining around your heart
that way you can feel it when it finally starts, to
tear apart your inner being....
then
you will come to terms that your soul
will be the place in which I shall reside.
cus I thought I told you I like it where its cold
because it reminds me of the times you actually tried
to let me go, only ending in failure,
making you realize that im never leaving your side
cus I will always be faithfull to the end
but
someday you will learn depravity on your own
and then I must find another place to call home....



Leaches

you are the leach sucking people in,
sucking them into your false beliefs,
and using them for your benefit,
when its said and done youve
filled them with false beliefs
of a brighter future,and forgiveness
but what they don't know is that
there is no future
there is no forgiveness
it is all hopeless disposition

when you used them for what they are worth
when you want them no more, they will be
tools of your false beliefs, spreading lies
of your hopeless disposition!!





FEARFUL DEITY

when someone says something then it means everything
when you say something then it will mean nothing

but how can this be if you are the one who has the idea
maybe they know it all cus they have no clue of belief
if this is true then hopefully this is surely a relief
from a wolrd that holds the key to no release.

when someone says nothing its everything to you
when i say something its nothing to any of you

surely this cant be the way that life was meant to be
there is something more out there that we cannot see
but if you fight the urges that are pushed upon you
then everyone wants to run and have nothing to do
with
YOU!!

When the voices call from above and say come home to me
then they will sit and wonder what was i supposed to be
where was i supposed to go in life?
surely this path was not all that was out there,
surely i wasn't supposed to go on living without a care

When god says something no one listens to the chosen
when the devil speaks everyone is cold and frozen

The beliefs that are shoved on you, returns to call
The beliefs they run from are there to make them fall







The Curse

The life we lead is the life we chose
the life we choose is the life we lose

but somehow death seems closer than the friends we left
and life seems to be an inch away from the step we took
to make a life out of things that we never knew...
and
to take away the life i knew and give me
memories that are built from anew
which will in turn discard the ashes from
ambers and make a life that changes me
from an angel of death to the
birth of creation

is a curse greater than eternal hell?

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The Hidden, Leaches, Fearfull Deity, The Curse

Contributed by Bum_G on Wednesday, 30th July 2008 @ 02:30:19 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



The hidden

Im always eating away at your insides
your just going to try to hide
me from everyone that you know, and love
but I dont think I will ever let you go
because it is so much fun tearing you apart
especially when I get to start in the heart
and work my way through your feeble body
and
you will never stop me, you will never know it
but im going to take all that you love and burn it
and let the ashes encase the lining around your heart
that way you can feel it when it finally starts, to
tear apart your inner being....
then
you will come to terms that your soul
will be the place in which I shall reside.
cus I thought I told you I like it where its cold
because it reminds me of the times you actually tried
to let me go, only ending in failure,
making you realize that im never leaving your side
cus I will always be faithfull to the end
but
someday you will learn depravity on your own
and then I must find another place to call home....



Leaches

you are the leach sucking people in,
sucking them into your false beliefs,
and using them for your benefit,
when its said and done youve
filled them with false beliefs
of a brighter future,and forgiveness
but what they don't know is that
there is no future
there is no forgiveness
it is all hopeless disposition

when you used them for what they are worth
when you want them no more, they will be
tools of your false beliefs, spreading lies
of your hopeless disposition!!





FEARFUL DEITY

when someone says something then it means everything
when you say something then it will mean nothing

but how can this be if you are the one who has the idea
maybe they know it all cus they have no clue of belief
if this is true then hopefully this is surely a relief
from a wolrd that holds the key to no release.

when someone says nothing its everything to you
when i say something its nothing to any of you

surely this cant be the way that life was meant to be
there is something more out there that we cannot see
but if you fight the urges that are pushed upon you
then everyone wants to run and have nothing to do
with
YOU!!

When the voices call from above and say come home to me
then they will sit and wonder what was i supposed to be
where was i supposed to go in life?
surely this path was not all that was out there,
surely i wasn't supposed to go on living without a care

When god says something no one listens to the chosen
when the devil speaks everyone is cold and frozen

The beliefs that are shoved on you, returns to call
The beliefs they run from are there to make them fall







The Curse

The life we lead is the life we chose
the life we choose is the life we lose

but somehow death seems closer than the friends we left
and life seems to be an inch away from the step we took
to make a life out of things that we never knew...
and
to take away the life i knew and give me
memories that are built from anew
which will in turn discard the ashes from
ambers and make a life that changes me
from an angel of death to the
birth of creation

is a curse greater than eternal hell?





Copyright © Bum_G ... [ 2008-07-30 14:30:19]
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Re: The Hidden, Leaches, Fearfull Deity, The Curse (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 30th July 2008 @ 02:47:24 PM AEST
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Every bit of this is intense. I love it.

Michelle




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