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Array ( [sid] => 144262 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ill love you forever [time] => 2008-07-30 18:50:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => when you came around, i wanted to meet you.

when i first met you, i knew i wouldnt forget you.

when we hung out for the first time, i couldnt forget you.

when i first kissed you, i felt that tingle.

when i first held you, i didnt want to let you go.

when i came over to sleep with you, i didnt want to ever wake up.

when we layed there watching that movie, i didnt want the movie to end.

when we would be on the phone for hours, i didnt want the phone to die.

when i told id love you forever, i meant till the world came to a crumble.

when i said till the end, i meant till my very last breath.

when we said it was over, thats when i lost you and couldnt forget you...
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ill love you forever

Contributed by sparkz16 on Wednesday, 30th July 2008 @ 06:50:31 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

when you came around, i wanted to meet you.

when i first met you, i knew i wouldnt forget you.

when we hung out for the first time, i couldnt forget you.

when i first kissed you, i felt that tingle.

when i first held you, i didnt want to let you go.

when i came over to sleep with you, i didnt want to ever wake up.

when we layed there watching that movie, i didnt want the movie to end.

when we would be on the phone for hours, i didnt want the phone to die.

when i told id love you forever, i meant till the world came to a crumble.

when i said till the end, i meant till my very last breath.

when we said it was over, thats when i lost you and couldnt forget you...

Copyright © sparkz16 ... [ 2008-07-30 18:50:31]
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Re: ill love you forever (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 31st July 2008 @ 10:01:17 AM AEST
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Adorable and sweet write........

Michelle

Re: ill love you forever (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 01:16:49 AM AEST
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aw this is so sweet and very straight from the heart.. very intense write.. good job here

rock on,

vampyress Jenni

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