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We are just good friends
Friends that care about each other
And would die for one another
But don’t you still think
That there could be more

Take a walk down a familiar a path
And meet me halfway
Lay on our backs and watch the clouds
And make it so every shape
Somehow relates to us

Just spending one minute with you
Could make a memory to lighten my life forever
Sometimes I just lay in bed
And think about you
Your beautiful smile
The cute way you laugh
And I say to myself
I am the luckiest guy in the world
To even know you

And I know there is a chance I will never get you back
But I still hope and I still wish
I wish on every shouting star
That passes through our atmosphere
And I hope that one day all my wishes will come true
But I have one more thing to say to you my dear
I will always love you
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Forever

Contributed by Anonymous44 on Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 02:04:56 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

To the rest of the world
We are just good friends
Friends that care about each other
And would die for one another
But don’t you still think
That there could be more

Take a walk down a familiar a path
And meet me halfway
Lay on our backs and watch the clouds
And make it so every shape
Somehow relates to us

Just spending one minute with you
Could make a memory to lighten my life forever
Sometimes I just lay in bed
And think about you
Your beautiful smile
The cute way you laugh
And I say to myself
I am the luckiest guy in the world
To even know you

And I know there is a chance I will never get you back
But I still hope and I still wish
I wish on every shouting star
That passes through our atmosphere
And I hope that one day all my wishes will come true
But I have one more thing to say to you my dear
I will always love you

Copyright Â© Anonymous44 ... [ 2008-08-10 14:04:56]
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Re: Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by ReyAkARey on Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 03:11:58 PM AEST
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Love this poem

Re: Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 03:47:28 PM AEST
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This is so adorable. I love it

Michelle

Re: Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 04:46:29 PM AEST
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i was caught up in this poem even rite at the 1st stanza...great job. This helped me redefine what love means. thanx. and the last stanza was bitter sweet, but thats what love is, and u possess it. The day of reunion may come, so keep wishing. take care
-K.Z..

Re: Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by beautiful_letdowns on Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 11:46:33 PM AEST
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This was bitterly awesome... and you captured what love really is. You are thankful to even know the person and have them in your life even if they aren't at the moment "yours". This just is unbelievably simple and complex at the same time and I enjoyed the poem from start to finish.. thanks for posting, you got talent so keep on writin and posting, and I will keep on reading:)

Re: Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Monday, 11th August 2008 @ 08:37:45 AM AEST
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Beautifully written, and very true as well. I think a lot of guys feel the same way as you express in this poem

Re: Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by akakin on Tuesday, 19th August 2008 @ 01:54:37 PM AEST
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(Just spending one minute with you
Could make a memory to lighten my life forever
Sometimes I just lay in bed
And think about you
Your beautiful smile
The cute way you laugh
And I say to myself
I am the luckiest guy in the world
To even know you)
Do u noe how many times i catch myself sitting on my bed thinking some of the same things about some i once loved or a boyfriend... realli gud love it

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