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Array ( [sid] => 144491 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Remember That Night I Killed You? [time] => 2008-08-10 19:40:33 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Hey baby.
Remember that night you and me we laid side by side
And i stabbed your spleen, with my knife?
Then we snorted fifty lines
And i sat and watched you die

Then we laughed and kissed and ********
You hit me so hard I couldn't sit up
And i had a black eye, and a bleeding nose
My world was dizzy, and you broke a few more bones

Then when I woke up
I grabbed my gun. I shot you right under your lung
And the blood saturated my kitchen floor
But i couldnt help myself, I shot you some more!

Then when you stopped bleeding you grabbed my head
And threw me like a rag doll into the bed
You kissed my neck and traced my hips
Then you bit like a vampire into my lips

It felt so good; but i wanted more.
I grabbed a razorblade, and pushed you to the floor
Picked the bluest artery, and took a slash
And watched in orgasm at the bleeding gash

You couldnt move, and I sat in the blood
And drowned in it. *******, this was our love!
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 13 [informant] => amber_vonhorror [notes] => Edited for profanity. - Moderator_14 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Remember That Night I Killed You?

Contributed by amber_vonhorror on Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 07:40:33 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Hey baby.
Remember that night you and me we laid side by side
And i stabbed your spleen, with my knife?
Then we snorted fifty lines
And i sat and watched you die

Then we laughed and kissed and ********
You hit me so hard I couldn't sit up
And i had a black eye, and a bleeding nose
My world was dizzy, and you broke a few more bones

Then when I woke up
I grabbed my gun. I shot you right under your lung
And the blood saturated my kitchen floor
But i couldnt help myself, I shot you some more!

Then when you stopped bleeding you grabbed my head
And threw me like a rag doll into the bed
You kissed my neck and traced my hips
Then you bit like a vampire into my lips

It felt so good; but i wanted more.
I grabbed a razorblade, and pushed you to the floor
Picked the bluest artery, and took a slash
And watched in orgasm at the bleeding gash

You couldnt move, and I sat in the blood
And drowned in it. *******, this was our love!

Copyright © amber_vonhorror ... [ 2008-08-10 19:40:33]
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Re: Remember That Night I Killed You? (User Rating: 1 )
by beautiful_letdowns on Sunday, 10th August 2008 @ 11:32:59 PM AEST
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wow.. kinky. lol. thanks for posting, it's not really my style but it's well written and unique.

Re: Remember That Night I Killed You? (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Monday, 11th August 2008 @ 10:25:03 AM AEST
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prolific self-indictment, indeed. . . still I find it intriguing, to say the least. . . more power to you. peace. elle

Re: Remember That Night I Killed You? (User Rating: 1 )
by juliestevens18 on Tuesday, 12th August 2008 @ 08:44:08 AM AEST
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Wow
I am very impressed with this. I wish I could write as... well I don't know what to call your writing. It is very passionate and angry, lusty and daring. I really enjoyed this piece. Keep writing!

Re: Remember That Night I Killed You? (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Tuesday, 12th August 2008 @ 10:57:57 AM AEST
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Oohhhhh
this is so beautiful....

Re: Remember That Night I Killed You? (User Rating: 1 )
by maggot on Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 02:31:31 PM AEST
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wow great write i like it
~maggot~

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