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[aid] => mick
[title] => Synthetic Love situation
[time] => 2008-08-16 07:26:19
[hometext] => Hey this is totally experimental, in terms of lyrics and style for me, All feedback needed and welcome. Thanks.
[bodytext] => She wanted him more than anything. It's all in the chase she said as she picked up her arrows. Leaving her group of friends. Like a hunter about to kill its prey. He’s just a fun loving misfit. Placed on her sadistic love hit list, Misplaced hello and a clumsy first impression. Unsuspectingly falling into his plans. Placed in a game of cat and mouse, But what happens when the mouse gets the upper hand. Its not just a game its more of the prize, As she first made a glance and caught a look at his eyes. Machinelike in playing the subconscious mind games. Weeks pass and they're a couple. Cat got reckless and let her guard down Mouse became wiser and pulled her down Into a pretend love secret He cant help it if he doesn’t want to keep the promise. So what’s gonna happen now. His worlds been turned upside down, Inside out, spinning around. With his beating heart, in this in throat About to be sick his stomachs turning. Shy boy becoming a man . Loving his life at the minute, but he wants to go back to how things where. He wants to be in love , but without the after pain or aftershocks. So they're playing into his synthetic love situation. Creating love but without the pain, The commitment or chores involved. So now the timid little mouse is playing his own game. But when the funs over someone’s heart has to break. Just for the next girl to come and try the same thing all over again, [comments] => 1 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 73 [informant] => liamleash [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )
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