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He Is Coming and Bringing Hell With Him
Contributed by
ingeniusidiot
on
Wednesday, 20th August 2008 @ 11:04:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Winged devils carry his anger
Lightening his step as he takes vengeance
Against those that have wronged him
As well as rest of this pathetic excuse of the human condition
Crimson eyes glow from shadows cast
From within midnights peril less watch
Silent steps walk by his side
All the while his prey sleep unknowing
While the walls watch silently
Icy fingers claw up a slumbering spine
Nightmares run the minds highway like blood thirsty vigilantes
Looking for their next unsuspecting victim
Standing next to dreaming eyes
With their forked tongues demons kiss
The beads of sweat that pour from flushed skin
As peaceful dreams turn dark and demented
2008
Copyright ©
ingeniusidiot
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2008-08-20 23:04:50]
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Re: He Is Coming and Bringing Hell With Him
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by Crow on
Thursday, 21st August 2008 @ 10:00:57 AM AEST
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| woo-hoo! this is great! I love this stuff...good work my friend. Lane |
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Re: He Is Coming and Bringing Hell With Him
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 22nd August 2008 @ 05:58:18 AM AEST
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Rich,
Brilliant piece. This is great.
Deadwriter
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Re: He Is Coming and Bringing Hell With Him
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by shelby on
Saturday, 23rd August 2008 @ 02:24:44 PM AEST
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Rich,
dark and well written you gave me shiverssssssss
hug
Michelle |
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Re: He Is Coming and Bringing Hell With Him
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by maggot on
Tuesday, 26th August 2008 @ 02:20:24 PM AEST
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man thats awsome i like dat stuff
good write
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Re: He Is Coming and Bringing Hell With Him
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by eeeitak on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 06:10:16 AM AEST
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| oh my gosh. this is so cool! i particularly love the last stanza, but this whole poem has just such an eerie mood to it... i love it! great write! |
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Re: He Is Coming and Bringing Hell With Him
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st March 2019 @ 10:15:58 AM AEST
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When I saw the title, I thought, oh maybe a poem about the movie Tombstone. But noooo. Just kidding. Still like it. Definitely spooky and dark.
Very nice!
Thanks,
Tim |
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