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Who Are You?
Contributed by
TaintedAir
on
Sunday, 24th August 2008 @ 03:56:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Who is this stranger in my skin
this lost soul here where i had been
did we meet when i sunk so low
lies bury the truth so i cannot know.
i wash my face with shaking hands
the world looks small from where i stand
i let the water sooth my skin
trickle over my pain, wetting my sin
I look to the mirror and find eyes that aren't mine
watery and blue with pain in each line
i stare, i search
but i do not find
there is nothing there
and the pain grows inside
its claws my chest
and my breath comes in sighs
"who are you?' i yell
"who are you?' i cry
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TaintedAir
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2008-08-24 15:56:32]
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Re: Who Are You?
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by twinkletoes on
Monday, 25th August 2008 @ 08:11:41 AM AEST
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| Dont run yourself down, I understand this poem and it is clear and consice as to what you want the reader to get out of it, its a job well done and I **enjoyed** it. |
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