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Array ( [sid] => 144753 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Indelible Mark [time] => 2008-08-27 13:09:49 [hometext] => maybe u can relate...if u've yearned again for ur 1st love after many years apart... [bodytext] => I have not told you this in quite a while now,
but when I think of nothing else, I think of you
and when I think of everything else, I still think of you.

We have not seen each other for so long either.
When I am with you, I become happy, yet weaker,
and when I am without you, I feel miserable, yet stronger.

Unfortunately, time has separated us by a lot.
Til this day, I still need you as a good friend,
but everyday, I want you so badly as a lover.

Whether you know my life-long secret or not,
and no matter how much my brittle heart bends,
my hopeless love for you, my friend, will burn forever.

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Indelible Mark

Contributed by Ambivalence on Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 01:09:49 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

I have not told you this in quite a while now,
but when I think of nothing else, I think of you
and when I think of everything else, I still think of you.

We have not seen each other for so long either.
When I am with you, I become happy, yet weaker,
and when I am without you, I feel miserable, yet stronger.

Unfortunately, time has separated us by a lot.
Til this day, I still need you as a good friend,
but everyday, I want you so badly as a lover.

Whether you know my life-long secret or not,
and no matter how much my brittle heart bends,
my hopeless love for you, my friend, will burn forever.

Copyright © Ambivalence ... [ 2008-08-27 13:09:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Indelible Mark (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 01:37:27 PM AEST
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nicely done,

wiz

Re: Indelible Mark (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 01:51:12 PM AEST
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WOW!! I can truly relate... Good write... I'll not say any more..lol
Jenni

Re: Indelible Mark (User Rating: 1 )
by navydocny on Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 12:44:05 AM AEST
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Love truly leaves an indelible mark..
Great poem...
Keep it Up!

Re: Indelible Mark (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 11:29:09 AM AEST
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this is beautiful, i wish all the best for you, and that someday love and you reside in the same room,

hugs n' love nessa

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