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Array ( [sid] => 144755 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blood Burns [time] => 2008-08-27 16:33:33 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I want you to look at me
And like what you see
I want to make heads turn
Hearts race blood burn
I need you to love me
Or at least like what you see
I want to make your blood burn
Heart race head turn
But you’re always looking at her
Eyes glued on her perfect face
What I’d give to be her
I’d kill to take her place
I want you to look at me
And be pleased
I want to make heads turn
Hearts race blood burn
I need you to want me
Or at least make you pleased
I want to make your blood burn
Heart race head turn
But I’m a fool when I’m around you
I’ve never felt this before
I don’t know what to say to you
Cause I know I’ll always love you more
I want you to look at me
And like what you see
I need you to love me
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 33 [informant] => eeeitak [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )
Blood Burns

Contributed by eeeitak on Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 04:33:33 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove



I want you to look at me
And like what you see
I want to make heads turn
Hearts race blood burn
I need you to love me
Or at least like what you see
I want to make your blood burn
Heart race head turn
But you’re always looking at her
Eyes glued on her perfect face
What I’d give to be her
I’d kill to take her place
I want you to look at me
And be pleased
I want to make heads turn
Hearts race blood burn
I need you to want me
Or at least make you pleased
I want to make your blood burn
Heart race head turn
But I’m a fool when I’m around you
I’ve never felt this before
I don’t know what to say to you
Cause I know I’ll always love you more
I want you to look at me
And like what you see
I need you to love me




Copyright © eeeitak ... [ 2008-08-27 16:33:33]
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Re: Blood Burns (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 09:05:32 PM AEST
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nice job... a sense of hopelessness comes through this... when the time is right perhaps you'll get your wish,

wiz


Re: Blood Burns (User Rating: 1 )
by navydocny on Wednesday, 27th August 2008 @ 11:52:05 PM AEST
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Its the needs and the wants that drive us. You show this well.
We all want to be needed and need to be wanted....
Good Job!


Re: Blood Burns (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 12:01:00 AM AEST
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I need you to want me

Or at least make you

pleased " this line is

incredible, any one not

wanting you after reading

this poem wouldn't be

human. absolutely beautiful

in an emotionaly compelling

way, a magnificent artist is

what you are . . .




Like wise thank you for

your read and comment . . .



Ben . . .



Re: Blood Burns (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 29th August 2008 @ 01:31:15 PM AEST
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The repitition of lines in a poem usually
throw me off, but they've added so much in
your piece, you did it beautifully. There is so
much love and angst in this poem, I don't
know what to do with myself. The fact that
you want him to love you, but will settle to
simply please him, is such a powerful
thought. Great job.

~Jesse


Re: Blood Burns (User Rating: 1 )
by ZiggyB on Friday, 29th August 2008 @ 10:32:39 PM AEST
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It's that need...or the search that keeps us going

Nice write.


Re: Blood Burns (User Rating: 1 )
by LauraMary on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 12:51:40 PM AEST
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You are the worlds best poet.
And every little thing you write is golden.
Yes.




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