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Eyes like fire
Body so seductive
Suck me in, finish me now

Evil little angel
Leaves me gasping
Blood red halo
Soak you in sin

Dark room eyes
Devil in the corner
Whispering to me
Embrace the addiction

Her words like morphine
Eyes turning back
Out of body experience
In her clutch I’ve conformed
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Addicted to the Evil in You

Contributed by Blake on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 02:38:59 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Her words like morphine
Eyes like fire
Body so seductive
Suck me in, finish me now

Evil little angel
Leaves me gasping
Blood red halo
Soak you in sin

Dark room eyes
Devil in the corner
Whispering to me
Embrace the addiction

Her words like morphine
Eyes turning back
Out of body experience
In her clutch I’ve conformed

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Re: Addicted to the Evil in You (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 02:50:06 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC....Feel free to show more of your work....
NIce imagery....scary tho..lol...
Jenni

Re: Addicted to the Evil in You (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 03:05:53 PM AEST
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nice write, it definitely has a 'dark' feel to it,

welcome,

wiz

Re: Addicted to the Evil in You (User Rating: 1 )
by eeeitak on Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 04:22:15 PM AEST
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This is AWESOME!
You definitely have talent,
the whole vibe that comes with this poem is just so creepy but very cool.
Keep on writing, man!

--Katie

Re: Addicted to the Evil in You (User Rating: 1 )
by breezyweezy on Sunday, 31st August 2008 @ 10:52:55 AM AEST
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welcome to YPDC, nice write,i hvent seen a lot of dark poetry in a wile

Re: Addicted to the Evil in You (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 04:19:48 PM AEST
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"her words like morphine" this is powerful, soulful, definitely a keeper. . . peace. elle

Re: Addicted to the Evil in You (User Rating: 1 )
by maggot on Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 02:17:39 PM AEST
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sweet poem man definately a dark feeling to it
keep writing you have a talent

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