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Array ( [sid] => 144868 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Beauty [time] => 2008-09-02 02:23:34 [hometext] => A description of what my eyes see when I look at Jeanine. Mother of my children, and my reason. My [bodytext] => Hellenic beauty is all that I see
Her eyes as green as the Aegean Sea
Lips of a muse that stills my heart
Hair of Helios makes me shudder and start
She sees not the majesty that I see
She is all, to whom I flee
My master, my lover, umbilical to home
Hers is a comeliness I wish was my own
One kiss, and embrace, to have her to hold
Is all that I long for, before I am old
Heaven on earth, is what she is to me
One day she will see, when she decides to see
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 2 [informant] => navydocny [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Beauty

Contributed by navydocny on Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 02:23:34 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Hellenic beauty is all that I see
Her eyes as green as the Aegean Sea
Lips of a muse that stills my heart
Hair of Helios makes me shudder and start
She sees not the majesty that I see
She is all, to whom I flee
My master, my lover, umbilical to home
Hers is a comeliness I wish was my own
One kiss, and embrace, to have her to hold
Is all that I long for, before I am old
Heaven on earth, is what she is to me
One day she will see, when she decides to see




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Re: Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 04:48:49 AM AEST
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what a beautiful poem, i really like the greek metaphors.


Re: Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 11:16:56 AM AEST
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Oh, I got more excited with each line as I
read on. This is an exquisite write of a deep
love for another. You write of her with ease, I
hope she decides to see in herself exactly
what you do. Beautiful and a joy to have
experienced.

~Jesse


Re: Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 04:26:03 PM AEST
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I hope you showed this to her it is beautiful.Nicely written...... May your love last forever

Michelle


Re: Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 5th September 2008 @ 02:07:23 AM AEST
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truly beautifully deeply full

hugs n' love nessa


Re: Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 07:18:08 AM AEST
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this is beauty....thanking you for showing this to us....wishing you beauty on the horizons of your future....
kara




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