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Array ( [sid] => 144877 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Up Up Away [time] => 2008-09-02 14:31:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Big ol load of coffee beans,
all stacked on the floor.
Thought we would need a lumper
oh no, not this trip no sir.

The man said back her up
through the skinny door
I thought this would be interesting
up a ramp backwards we went.

Unhook the trailor next thing I know
up up up and away
there the trailor goes.

Straight up in the air,
beans sliding out
I thought what a way to do it
glad the tractor wasn't still hooked no doubt.

Av and Leshay took their window seats
always bright eyed
a better trucker duo one would never meet.
Up up away there the trailor goes
back down once more down the road we go.

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Up Up Away

Contributed by shelby on Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 02:31:49 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Big ol load of coffee beans,
all stacked on the floor.
Thought we would need a lumper
oh no, not this trip no sir.

The man said back her up
through the skinny door
I thought this would be interesting
up a ramp backwards we went.

Unhook the trailor next thing I know
up up up and away
there the trailor goes.

Straight up in the air,
beans sliding out
I thought what a way to do it
glad the tractor wasn't still hooked no doubt.

Av and Leshay took their window seats
always bright eyed
a better trucker duo one would never meet.
Up up away there the trailor goes
back down once more down the road we go.

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Re: Up Up Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 02:55:53 PM AEST
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I love how easily you are inspired to write,
this is great! The dog and cat give my heart
a little tug, that's so sweet that they're there
right with you. Great write!

~Jesse

Re: Up Up Away (User Rating: 1 )
by LauraMary on Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 02:59:25 PM AEST
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I agree with Jesse.
Awesome job!

Re: Up Up Away (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 03:18:09 PM AEST
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sounds like you had a great time!!

another great post michelle...keep writing,

wiz

Re: Up Up Away (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Tuesday, 2nd September 2008 @ 08:59:56 PM AEST
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Its amazing how these places work sometimes and I agree with everyone that you can take any place or situation and put it into words. Av and Leshay look like theyre having a grand ol time..lol. Another great piece. Cant wait to be able to write with you again...miss you

hugs
rich

Re: Up Up Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 01:13:26 AM AEST
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"lumper"?
Sound like you are having WAY too much fun!!! :)

Re: Up Up Away (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 02:23:46 AM AEST
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me thinks you are doing just what you were meant to do my friend...

Re: Up Up Away (User Rating: 1 )
by LoveStruck_Hippie on Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 07:46:43 AM AEST
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Absolutely loved this light hearted write my friend. Wish I was there to join the fur kids in the window seat.

Peace and Love my friend

~Shannon

Re: Up Up Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 3rd September 2008 @ 06:51:04 PM AEST
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Cute, Michelle, cute. Oh, and I like the poem too. ;-)

Take care,

Tim

Re: Up Up Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 12:40:15 AM AEST
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Omigosh! The furkids are ADORABLE! lol

This was so delightful hun. What an adventure-- the life of a trucker.
And it is perfect that you can take the "kids" with you. Wherever you
are .. is home. *sigh* :)

Touching write, hun. Love that you keep in touch and post here
even while you're 'on the road'.

*hugs to you and the gang*

~ Breezy

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