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Array ( [sid] => 144965 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => a perfect plan [time] => 2008-09-06 08:05:39 [hometext] => [bodytext] => you hear, why me,,
you hear, what did i do wrong,,
you hear words,
that have been around for years,,

a perfect plan was set,,
for us to not understand,,
but it's there,,
for us not to question,,

we can't question,
what's not there,
nor can we say why,,
but still tomorrow,,
we ask the same thing,,

we can't blame ourselves,,
for the stupidity that we do,,
we blame everyone for our mistakes,,
we must look into the mirror,,
for there's the blame,,

a perfect plan was made,,
for we can't control,,
we live the best that we can,,
but still can't control,,

go to work tomorrow,,
an accident,,whose fault,,
a perfect plan,,

we live for this,,
we accept this,,
we want this,,
it was made for us,,
this perfect plan of life,,,,

craig s. meeks
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 21 [informant] => spooky [notes] => Poem edited for typos... [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

a perfect plan

Contributed by spooky on Saturday, 6th September 2008 @ 08:05:39 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

you hear, why me,,
you hear, what did i do wrong,,
you hear words,
that have been around for years,,

a perfect plan was set,,
for us to not understand,,
but it's there,,
for us not to question,,

we can't question,
what's not there,
nor can we say why,,
but still tomorrow,,
we ask the same thing,,

we can't blame ourselves,,
for the stupidity that we do,,
we blame everyone for our mistakes,,
we must look into the mirror,,
for there's the blame,,

a perfect plan was made,,
for we can't control,,
we live the best that we can,,
but still can't control,,

go to work tomorrow,,
an accident,,whose fault,,
a perfect plan,,

we live for this,,
we accept this,,
we want this,,
it was made for us,,
this perfect plan of life,,,,

craig s. meeks

Copyright © spooky ... [ 2008-09-06 08:05:39]
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Re: a perfect plan (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 6th September 2008 @ 08:23:08 AM AEST
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I'm sure many will relate to this....
Jenni

Re: a perfect plan (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 03:40:59 AM AEST
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a bit of contrition in your message... i enjoyed this, however, the double commas are unnecessary,

keep writing,

wiz

Re: a perfect plan (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 7th September 2008 @ 02:41:22 PM AEST
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craig this is so true, perfect plans may be made but we just never know... life is so precarious...

hugs n' love nessa

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