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Array ( [sid] => 145 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Be With Me [time] => 2002-07-11 20:18:07 [hometext] => And the deeper side of me comes out... [bodytext] => I'm losing my mind, I'm falling away
Like I do every other day
I feel so alone, I don't feel like me
Why are you leaving me lonely?

I hurt easily, don't break your promises to me
Don't tell me I'm your best friend then put someone else first
Little things are enough to make me turn inside out
But I know you're the one that could turn me back around

When I'm left alone these thoughts multiply
I might get just a little weird
Please sit here with me for a little while
There's no need for you to speak words

And if you start to lose me in a song, let me go
I'll be back in 3 minutes and 44 seconds
Coz maybe inside that song is where I'll find myself
The music makes me feel like I'm more than what I am

Sometimes I space out and start to daydream
Of love and things I've never seen
And some nights I stay up without sleeping
Wonder if here's where I belong

You see, I'm on my own in these lands of Forever
No one to walk beside or tell me I'll be okay
That's not what I want anyway, coz words don't mean much
Just to walk with me is good enough, just be with me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 21 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Be With Me

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 08:18:07 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I'm losing my mind, I'm falling away
Like I do every other day
I feel so alone, I don't feel like me
Why are you leaving me lonely?

I hurt easily, don't break your promises to me
Don't tell me I'm your best friend then put someone else first
Little things are enough to make me turn inside out
But I know you're the one that could turn me back around

When I'm left alone these thoughts multiply
I might get just a little weird
Please sit here with me for a little while
There's no need for you to speak words

And if you start to lose me in a song, let me go
I'll be back in 3 minutes and 44 seconds
Coz maybe inside that song is where I'll find myself
The music makes me feel like I'm more than what I am

Sometimes I space out and start to daydream
Of love and things I've never seen
And some nights I stay up without sleeping
Wonder if here's where I belong

You see, I'm on my own in these lands of Forever
No one to walk beside or tell me I'll be okay
That's not what I want anyway, coz words don't mean much
Just to walk with me is good enough, just be with me

Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2002-07-11 20:18:07]
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Re: Be With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel on Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 04:29:21 AM AEST
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hey there angel! well now, i think this sounds a bit familiar. those times alone seem really long and lonesome, but they aren't exactly the lands of forever... sure sounds good thou!! loved the images you captured here, somehow it's sounding a bit too much how i felt not so long ago. no worries, but kudos anyhowsers!! ;0) -daniel

Re: Be With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Emmie74 on Saturday, 20th July 2002 @ 07:05:38 AM AEST
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hey, sweetie... if you ever feel down, call me. and i will try my hardest to be there for you! i promise. your my best friend, always and forever.

love always
~Em

Re: Be With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ChicaBug on Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 04:45:40 AM AEST
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This really captured how I feel sometimes...I just need someone to be there with me. Good Write!

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