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Array ( [sid] => 145179 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One-night lover [time] => 2008-09-15 10:56:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I saw him and I flustered a moment
Like I normally do when I see a guy
It wasn't much later
That the party took off
And we started acting crazy
After darkness fell, that's when things began happening
It was innocent enough
Spin the bottle, a childish game
But when he spun it I looked in shock
As he crept towards me
A smile on his face
I leaned in gently, too high on adrinalin to care
And when our lips touched
I felt it, that unfamiliar feeling hit my stomach
His arms at my waist, mine clutching his back
Our lips parted gently
And the spark appeared
The taste of his tongue excited me
Like a forbidden fruit
He was perfectly perfect
And I remember tasting mint
Even though he'd not had anything to eat or drink
I wanted to moan, press myself against him
And never let go
I don't remember how long it went
Not nearly long enough
When hands ripped at our limbs
And tore us apart
Laughter filled everyone
And I smiled too
"Hi my name's Lexy, who are you?"
He told me and then on
I felt incredibly enthralled
He was enticing, exciting
When he said goodbye, I felt myself stand up and gently cross the floor
Wrapping my arms around him tightly
And bringing my lips to his
I never did anything like this
It was slow and soft, gentle and chaste
As I kissed him goodbye
I knew it
I'd never see him again...
But I knew it the moment I kissed him
I had fallen in love with him [comments] => 3 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 24 [informant] => desolantdreamer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
One-night lover

Contributed by desolantdreamer on Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 10:56:11 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



I saw him and I flustered a moment
Like I normally do when I see a guy
It wasn't much later
That the party took off
And we started acting crazy
After darkness fell, that's when things began happening
It was innocent enough
Spin the bottle, a childish game
But when he spun it I looked in shock
As he crept towards me
A smile on his face
I leaned in gently, too high on adrinalin to care
And when our lips touched
I felt it, that unfamiliar feeling hit my stomach
His arms at my waist, mine clutching his back
Our lips parted gently
And the spark appeared
The taste of his tongue excited me
Like a forbidden fruit
He was perfectly perfect
And I remember tasting mint
Even though he'd not had anything to eat or drink
I wanted to moan, press myself against him
And never let go
I don't remember how long it went
Not nearly long enough
When hands ripped at our limbs
And tore us apart
Laughter filled everyone
And I smiled too
"Hi my name's Lexy, who are you?"
He told me and then on
I felt incredibly enthralled
He was enticing, exciting
When he said goodbye, I felt myself stand up and gently cross the floor
Wrapping my arms around him tightly
And bringing my lips to his
I never did anything like this
It was slow and soft, gentle and chaste
As I kissed him goodbye
I knew it
I'd never see him again...
But I knew it the moment I kissed him
I had fallen in love with him




Copyright © desolantdreamer ... [ 2008-09-15 10:56:11]
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Re: One-night lover (User Rating: 1 )
by Muinanyere on Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 02:58:22 PM AEST
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this is so sad but sweet, great write


Re: One-night lover (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 05:48:01 PM AEST
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very sweet write from you...this is a game that i never got to play....i think i got cheated in my childhood...i never knew it could yield to this much emotions and passion...
*sigh*
thanks for letting me live it here instead
kara


Re: One-night lover (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 10:58:06 AM AEST
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what an excellent read, not to bitter not to sweet. very good poem. Lane




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