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Array ( [sid] => 145315 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Yesterday I Made a Huge Mistake. [time] => 2008-09-21 22:50:25 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Kiss me like a child; fifty times on my cheek
This little burst of temperment, leaves me breathless for weeks
And down, and out;
Yesterday i made a huge mistake.
I sat out in the rain; and bled our romance away
I cut til my bones felt the blade. Just, alone in. The. Rain.
Nobody knows about us anyway.
Nobody knows the secrets we hide; when the sun forgets to shine
The feelings we give eachother
Feel better then anything but worse than everything.
I can't weep; but the tears build behind my eyes
How much it aches to say goodbye.
I replay these words again and again in my mind
I cannot justify.
I cannot explain.
I know the pain; you feel as you lay next to me
With you gone, it's harder to breathe
I think God forgot to bless us when we were ripped into this world
As tiny souls; but hearts
That forever forget to beat. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 22 [informant] => amber_vonHorror [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Yesterday I Made a Huge Mistake.

Contributed by amber_vonHorror on Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 10:50:25 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Kiss me like a child; fifty times on my cheek
This little burst of temperment, leaves me breathless for weeks
And down, and out;
Yesterday i made a huge mistake.
I sat out in the rain; and bled our romance away
I cut til my bones felt the blade. Just, alone in. The. Rain.
Nobody knows about us anyway.
Nobody knows the secrets we hide; when the sun forgets to shine
The feelings we give eachother
Feel better then anything but worse than everything.
I can't weep; but the tears build behind my eyes
How much it aches to say goodbye.
I replay these words again and again in my mind
I cannot justify.
I cannot explain.
I know the pain; you feel as you lay next to me
With you gone, it's harder to breathe
I think God forgot to bless us when we were ripped into this world
As tiny souls; but hearts
That forever forget to beat.

Copyright © amber_vonHorror ... [ 2008-09-21 22:50:25]
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Re: Yesterday I Made a Huge Mistake. (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 11:11:56 PM AEST
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yes we do,,but from the thought of mistakes,, we learn from them,,well written,,
a friend in words,,spooky

Re: Yesterday I Made a Huge Mistake. (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 22nd September 2008 @ 12:50:15 AM AEST
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nicely done,

wiz

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