Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 02-June 10:17:14 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 145455 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Seen You Smile [time] => 2008-09-30 17:26:23 [hometext] => Well its been some time since I posted a poem on here, its been some time since i'v had time write any to tell the truth. this is an old one i wrote, kind of a half hearted atempt at a song but whatever, hope you enjoy it [bodytext] => by now i know your time has come
its why my heart feels so numb
you say that you'll get by
but in the end i know you'll die
the monster has come for you
and no one else has a clue

its been so long
since i've seen you smile
its been so long
since i knew why
its been so long
your life's on trial
its been so long
since i've seen you smile

so now your life has come to its end
some hearts just wont ever mend
a sickly smile on your face
soon you'll be leaving this place
and you wont be coming back
just a memory in the black

its been so long
since i've seen you smile
its been so long
since i knew why
its been so long
your life's on trial
its been so long
since i've seen you smile

we've been best of friends for oh so long
but your fading like the sound of a gong
i've heard you screaming at night
and now your giving up the final fight
now your leaving us on our own
but you know your not alone

its been so long
since i've seen you smile
its been so long
since i knew why
its been so long
your life's on trial
its been so long
since i've seen you smile

so now we greet your sad and final day
what more is there that we can say
now your time is drawing near
and now all your friends are here
its sad to finally see you go
and yet time passes slow

its been so long
since i've seen you smile
its been so long
since i knew why
its been so long
your life's on trial
its been so long
since i've seen you smile

now i've see another friend pass on by
it seems so sad that you had to die
and my heart is full of sorrow
will i be feeling better by tomorrow
a life full of death and pain
all we ever get is rain

its been so long
since i've seen you smile
its been so long
since i knew why
its been so long
your life's on trial
its been so long
since i've seen you smile

its been so long
since i've seen you smile
its been so long
since i knew why
its been so long
your life's on trial
its been so long
since i've seen you smile [comments] => 2 [counter] => 829 [topic] => 13 [informant] => poetic_punk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Seen You Smile

Contributed by poetic_punk on Tuesday, 30th September 2008 @ 05:26:23 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



by now i know your time has come
its why my heart feels so numb
you say that you'll get by
but in the end i know you'll die
the monster has come for you
and no one else has a clue

its been so long
since i've seen you smile
its been so long
since i knew why
its been so long
your life's on trial
its been so long
since i've seen you smile

so now your life has come to its end
some hearts just wont ever mend
a sickly smile on your face
soon you'll be leaving this place
and you wont be coming back
just a memory in the black

its been so long
since i've seen you smile
its been so long
since i knew why
its been so long
your life's on trial
its been so long
since i've seen you smile

we've been best of friends for oh so long
but your fading like the sound of a gong
i've heard you screaming at night
and now your giving up the final fight
now your leaving us on our own
but you know your not alone

its been so long
since i've seen you smile
its been so long
since i knew why
its been so long
your life's on trial
its been so long
since i've seen you smile

so now we greet your sad and final day
what more is there that we can say
now your time is drawing near
and now all your friends are here
its sad to finally see you go
and yet time passes slow

its been so long
since i've seen you smile
its been so long
since i knew why
its been so long
your life's on trial
its been so long
since i've seen you smile

now i've see another friend pass on by
it seems so sad that you had to die
and my heart is full of sorrow
will i be feeling better by tomorrow
a life full of death and pain
all we ever get is rain

its been so long
since i've seen you smile
its been so long
since i knew why
its been so long
your life's on trial
its been so long
since i've seen you smile

its been so long
since i've seen you smile
its been so long
since i knew why
its been so long
your life's on trial
its been so long
since i've seen you smile




Copyright © poetic_punk ... [ 2008-09-30 17:26:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Seen You Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Tuesday, 30th September 2008 @ 08:48:11 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Wow, I'd like to hear the score that goes with this for the full effect. I enjoyed the lyrics very much. I think what I appreciated the most about it is the fact that I could think of so many ways to interpret this. That makes it apllicable to many different circumstances and hearts. This is important with these dark songs in my opinion.
Kara


Re: Seen You Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Catalina on Tuesday, 30th September 2008 @ 09:32:32 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
a beautiful moving peice. Thanx for sharing this, it brought tears to my eyes.




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com