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Array ( [sid] => 145507 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The feeling [time] => 2008-10-03 12:25:50 [hometext] => I would greatly appreciate if u could comment THANX! [bodytext] => The feeling
The feeling is not deep
but through it all it's still there lingering and growing.
As we get close to each other the feeling becomes
deeper & feels great. What we have is beautiful, lovely, &
feels almost heavenly but is now
dwindling away. Is it because of me?
Why ask when I know it is.
I walk as though I am untouchable perhaps
even unloveable but truly I can be loved but
I need help to break through this shell &
show you how I feel. Lately, I can see you
slowly drifting away into another's arms & your
once loving eyes are growing cold.
When I look into your eyes I can see someone
else hold's your heart because that face doesn't belong to me.
I wanna show you so bad how I feel, but
I'm scared of what the world will think & terrified if you'll accept my true feelings
and will they be returned?
I'm also confused because I'm not sure if this feeling is real and
I don't wanna hurt you because hurting you is really something
I can't bare. I wish you knew how I felt but I not only want you to know but to feel it.
I want you to feel how you light up my day,make me smile even at the thought
of you, give me the loving feeling I've been longing for.
I don't know what to do and I'm so lost but through it all the feeling is there.....
and I'm hurting just to love you. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 2 [informant] => tk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
The feeling

Contributed by tk on Friday, 3rd October 2008 @ 12:25:50 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



The feeling
The feeling is not deep
but through it all it's still there lingering and growing.
As we get close to each other the feeling becomes
deeper & feels great. What we have is beautiful, lovely, &
feels almost heavenly but is now
dwindling away. Is it because of me?
Why ask when I know it is.
I walk as though I am untouchable perhaps
even unloveable but truly I can be loved but
I need help to break through this shell &
show you how I feel. Lately, I can see you
slowly drifting away into another's arms & your
once loving eyes are growing cold.
When I look into your eyes I can see someone
else hold's your heart because that face doesn't belong to me.
I wanna show you so bad how I feel, but
I'm scared of what the world will think & terrified if you'll accept my true feelings
and will they be returned?
I'm also confused because I'm not sure if this feeling is real and
I don't wanna hurt you because hurting you is really something
I can't bare. I wish you knew how I felt but I not only want you to know but to feel it.
I want you to feel how you light up my day,make me smile even at the thought
of you, give me the loving feeling I've been longing for.
I don't know what to do and I'm so lost but through it all the feeling is there.....
and I'm hurting just to love you.




Copyright © tk ... [ 2008-10-03 12:25:50]
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Re: The feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Friday, 3rd October 2008 @ 01:28:56 PM AEST
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i applaud you for getting so much emotion and honesty out. this is hard in love poetry, especially unrequited love
kara


Re: The feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 02:57:24 AM AEST
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Well, you've taken the first step. You've written it out, and done a wonderful job of expressing yourself on paper. Hopefully it has helped you sort out some of those unsure feelings.
Also, in my opinion, saying something and being fulfilled is worth the risk of a hundred rejections.


Re: The feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 04:20:09 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC!

You have certainly expressed your emotion well and there is deep hurt in your words. I found the last line to be enormously poetic. You can never know what will be returned until you have sent an invitation on return. So once that is done perhaps you will find what you are looking for. Perhaps not. But as Jecks stated rejection is a worthy price to find the love you deserve.


SCM


Re: The feeling (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 04:47:18 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC,
this is a deeply moving and honest write.
Nice work.

Michelle




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