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Blow through me
Mystical dream
Brushes of magic
warm summer breeze
each leaf dancing in the trees
raindancermyst, crystal blue

The wind whispered your name.

You shake the ground
earth moves beneath the feet
depth of your eyes pierce through me
you are the thunder
before the storm
providing the rain to cleanse me

The wind whispered our names
Bonds never broken

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Magic

Contributed by recklessguy on Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 03:28:48 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

You move me
Blow through me
Mystical dream
Brushes of magic
warm summer breeze
each leaf dancing in the trees
raindancermyst, crystal blue

The wind whispered your name.

You shake the ground
earth moves beneath the feet
depth of your eyes pierce through me
you are the thunder
before the storm
providing the rain to cleanse me

The wind whispered our names
Bonds never broken

Copyright © recklessguy ... [ 2008-10-04 03:28:48]
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Re: Magic (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 03:44:51 AM AEST
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This is amazing, romantic, and damn poetic! I loved every line of this and you two certainly coexist in poetry with a magnitude! The enitre work is breath taking but the final two lines cap this off to perfection. This is wonderful work you two!

BRAVO!

SCM

Re: Magic (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 03:48:42 AM AEST
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Oh no I just missed you.
Dang it dang it you still online somewhere?
I was out of the truck and had a problem in the parking lot, I will tell you later was not good!
My friend you can and do write and I am glad we had time here and there to do this. Shall we do it again??

Where are you at? I am in Houston at the TA
Stuck without a damn load!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Call me kkkkk
Love u
Shall

(this is so darn pretty!)

Re: Magic (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 06:24:18 AM AEST
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this poem is magic great job

Shari

Re: Magic (User Rating: 1 )
by Starchild7 on Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 08:40:14 AM AEST
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Now that was really beautiful and just flowed enchantingly, thank you.
With love and light Starchild xx

Re: Magic (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Sunday, 5th October 2008 @ 11:17:08 AM AEST
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you guys compliment each other well. whatever brought this about...
you guys should definitely work together again
kara

Re: Magic (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 01:27:58 PM AEST
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"The wind whispered our names"

OH! How brilliantly romantic is THAT line??? Damn fine you two.
There is so much magic within your lines. This is the ultimate
in romantic movement. Very beautiful. You two write very well
together!! :) Exceptional word choices.

~ Breezy

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