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Array ( [sid] => 145522 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Vale of Avalon [time] => 2008-10-04 09:02:55 [hometext] => I was inspired on the top of Glastonbury Tor it was just so mystical [bodytext] => Sitting here soaking up the beauty with a
Gentle breeze caressing my whole being.
Surrounded by an idyllic picture of nature.

Lost deep in thought, I step out of time to
A faraway land of myths, mysticism and
Legend.

In a moment of clarity I watch the scene
As the events begin to unfold before my
Very eyes.

As I look down on the Vale of Avalon, all
I see is sheer beauty and tranquillity that will
Forever be engraved upon my soul.

It is such a magickal place, the atmosphere
Draws you into its mystical fold. It shall live
On eternally in my memory.

With love and light Starchild [comments] => 5 [counter] => 201 [topic] => 40 [informant] => Starchild7 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )

Vale of Avalon

Contributed by Starchild7 on Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 09:02:55 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

Sitting here soaking up the beauty with a
Gentle breeze caressing my whole being.
Surrounded by an idyllic picture of nature.

Lost deep in thought, I step out of time to
A faraway land of myths, mysticism and
Legend.

In a moment of clarity I watch the scene
As the events begin to unfold before my
Very eyes.

As I look down on the Vale of Avalon, all
I see is sheer beauty and tranquillity that will
Forever be engraved upon my soul.

It is such a magickal place, the atmosphere
Draws you into its mystical fold. It shall live
On eternally in my memory.

With love and light Starchild

Copyright © Starchild7 ... [ 2008-10-04 09:02:55]
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Re: Vale of Avalon (User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 12:13:04 PM AEST
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a lovley write. one can only be inspired in a place like this and your honestly was just lovley. you captured the serenity of this ancient wonder in a very nice way!!!

keep it up!

Re: Vale of Avalon (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 05:24:08 PM AEST
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What a beautiful piece of wrriting,

delicate and peaceful, as wind

chimes in a distant breeze,

simply lovely to read and get

lost in . . .

ty likewise 4 your read and

and comment . . .

Ben . . .

Re: Vale of Avalon (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Sunday, 5th October 2008 @ 03:30:08 AM AEST
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another beautiful picture from you! thank you for taking me there!
Kara

Re: Vale of Avalon (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 01:28:08 PM AEST
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A true delight for these tired eyes to read today.
I really enjoyed this.

Michelle

Re: Vale of Avalon (User Rating: 1 )
by Starchild7 on Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 05:10:07 PM AEST
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Thank you everyone for all the beautiful comments i truly appreciate you taking time out to read and comment and i just love to write, its in my soul.
With love and light Starchild

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