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Array ( [sid] => 145563 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I`m Trying [time] => 2008-10-06 10:02:14 [hometext] => this was taken from a write by..Kara, We arranged it, and added very simple progression chords. The heart was already in it.You can hear it roughed out on My [bodytext] => You can hear this on My "Home Page, a small board I use for music..

I'm trying, to smile Dad
everythings so blue
without you.

Its cold here, so lonesome
every lesson
getting Me through this.

its hard to find strength
I can hold on too.

I can't find a positive.. side
of My blue...

I`m trying...to be strong Dad
twenty-four..and need You
so badly...

are You still proud of me
am I still your baby
that little girl knew

its hard to find strength
I can hold on too...

I can't find a positive.. side
of My blue...

"I`m trying
every day Dad
its hard without You beside me

are You still proud of me
am I still your baby
that little girl knew

its hard to find strength
I can hold on too...

I can't find one positive.. side
of My blue... K Smith/ LVincent

[comments] => 8 [counter] => 343 [topic] => 34 [informant] => crow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

I`m Trying

Contributed by crow on Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 10:02:14 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

You can hear this on My "Home Page, a small board I use for music..

I'm trying, to smile Dad
everythings so blue
without you.

Its cold here, so lonesome
every lesson
getting Me through this.

its hard to find strength
I can hold on too.

I can't find a positive.. side
of My blue...

I`m trying...to be strong Dad
twenty-four..and need You
so badly...

are You still proud of me
am I still your baby
that little girl knew

its hard to find strength
I can hold on too...

I can't find a positive.. side
of My blue...

"I`m trying
every day Dad
its hard without You beside me

are You still proud of me
am I still your baby
that little girl knew

its hard to find strength
I can hold on too...

I can't find one positive.. side
of My blue... K Smith/ LVincent

Copyright © crow ... [ 2008-10-06 10:02:14]
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Re: I`m Trying (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 02:33:37 PM AEST
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I read this before it is pretty.

Re: I`m Trying (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 05:32:22 PM AEST
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thank you lane...pleasant surprise to wake up to! i love this! hope everyone else does too!
kara

Re: I`m Trying (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 08:50:24 AM AEST
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beautiful

Shari

Re: I`m Trying (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 10:03:53 AM AEST
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Lovely adaptation of one of my fav poets here, Lane... I'll listen to it a little later and I'm sure I would just love it...
Jenni

Re: I`m Trying (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 10:38:01 AM AEST
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thank you all for taking the time to listen and read, Kara whats not to like..the simple bare emotion laid out before us. It could have been two words.."I`m Trying..that stands as volume to me. thank you, Lane

Re: I`m Trying (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 14th October 2008 @ 08:05:58 PM AEST
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This choked me up the first time I read Karabear's poem and it chokes me up listening and reading it. It's really sad yet beautifully done here. You did a really good job adapting it to music.

Kara, I am positive he is still proud of you. I am positive you are still his baby.

*huge ebar hug*

Love,

Tim

P.S. What the hell? No votes! I'd give it a ten if I could.

Re: I`m Trying (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 10:41:23 PM AEST
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Sad but good work from you both.
huggs,
emy

Re: I`m Trying (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Friday, 1st June 2018 @ 01:39:20 AM AEST
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Beautiful!!!!!!!!!

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